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"The Boobs Split up"
Our protagonists decide to split up to cover more ground: just watching the strength of their "alliance", Freya knows she has this game in the bag.
Prev. Pg https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54273495/
Next Pg https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54359541/
P.S.: I was hesitant whether to post this page along with the other 16 to fully have this part of the arc posted, as the difference between this and the last page of the line would be one page apart - I been having problems visualizing the story for months, and this needed to be done with. So for the past 24 hours, I was able to pull a script starting from Pg 18 as point for reference then dividing it into various parts, with 4 intended face off with Freya (two for Johnny, two for Marshie), then their face-off/defeat and later interrogation, and final resolution and ending.
I was walking like an idiot in circles, feeling the gaps in between some of these sequences my head hurts.
But in the end after tweaking the script and fully completing Johnny's face off, the overall length of the script (from Pg18 of the comic as its reference) is 11pgs, so I assume it falls into 30-40 pages for the comic over all if I were to go by estimate- with 3 major encounters (One Johnny, One Marshie, and Both and defeat), interrogation and the stories resolution. Meaning the Comic could be around 65 to 75 Pages long when its done. Give or take how those sequences can be or shorten down. So next pg in line, is literally the next one been made.
Not lying my head hurts, but it feels good to have gone through a creative storm of ideas after a long time.
Our protagonists decide to split up to cover more ground: just watching the strength of their "alliance", Freya knows she has this game in the bag.
Prev. Pg https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54273495/
Next Pg https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54359541/
P.S.: I was hesitant whether to post this page along with the other 16 to fully have this part of the arc posted, as the difference between this and the last page of the line would be one page apart - I been having problems visualizing the story for months, and this needed to be done with. So for the past 24 hours, I was able to pull a script starting from Pg 18 as point for reference then dividing it into various parts, with 4 intended face off with Freya (two for Johnny, two for Marshie), then their face-off/defeat and later interrogation, and final resolution and ending.
I was walking like an idiot in circles, feeling the gaps in between some of these sequences my head hurts.
But in the end after tweaking the script and fully completing Johnny's face off, the overall length of the script (from Pg18 of the comic as its reference) is 11pgs, so I assume it falls into 30-40 pages for the comic over all if I were to go by estimate- with 3 major encounters (One Johnny, One Marshie, and Both and defeat), interrogation and the stories resolution. Meaning the Comic could be around 65 to 75 Pages long when its done. Give or take how those sequences can be or shorten down. So next pg in line, is literally the next one been made.
Not lying my head hurts, but it feels good to have gone through a creative storm of ideas after a long time.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Human
Size 1275 x 2891px
File Size 3.45 MB
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Hey, I know you have done alot of work and effort in making this story but the fact that this guy (Even if he is a bit of a fool) gets so much abuse from this nasty peace of trash woman is horrible. I enjoy all your other comics alot but this guy just gets abuse after abuse whether it be physical or verbal from this stupid woman. The fact that just because he is a guy, he can get hurt by the woman however she sees fit is not cool. So not cool. I just dislike her character more and more. I don't want to see her succeed and don't want those two getting together in the end because she would just treat him like trash all the time then. The way she hurts him so much over and over again just makes me feel sick to my stomach. And the fact he just obays her still is awful like he is a donkey getting whipped to do work.
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