Oh wow, I just went to the front page and saw this as the most recent art. What a coincidence. XD Poor Frijir... But I hope Zonoya doesn't get mad at Ash now. The last thing we need is more anger between everyone.

Poor Frijir. Ash needs a spanking.

as your avatar woulkd probably say... "Yess he doesss......"

Victory is M....... His >.< doh!

Nina Unwritten Lines

Nina: "It's a time-honored enforcement of the food chain. The weak are outed and then eaten."

Nina: "I just needed your tech-savvy, not what's in below you."

Nina: "I have dark magic that could destroy you."

Nina: "You want to come in the hot tub with me, don't you Frijir? You can’t go in the hot tub. That would be gross."

Frijir and Ash are decapited, both are dead in front of Nina

Nina: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nina: "Call 911"

Nina: "No Please!!!!!!!!!"

Nina is Killed

nina's corpse falls to the lake


2 Days Later

Spyro: "Nina You are in Home??"

Cynder: "Were in here now"

Spyro See Nina's, Ash's and Frijir's corpses floating in the Lake with no life

Spyro: "AHGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH!!!!!!!

Nicely done as always with these.

Ticking time bomb...

Wait, Ash is a GUY!?

Yes

...Wow WAY TO KEEP UP DUDE..

Well I came in part way through, and Ash is PINK, so I kinda figured Ash was a girl.

Cause pink automatically means girl.

Well you don't see pink male dragons very often, that's all. Jeez.

fun fact: Early on, pink indicated boy, blue indicated girl.

my god this is getting even more interesting!

-waits intently for the next one- ouo this is getting better and better <3

-bops ash too- >:c

Hark! Doth thou hearth the sounds of a bell ringing? Why I doth think it is on.

hmms oxhorn refernce ^^

well, i suppose little Frijir does have a right to be all upset... still though, it was bad timing that he ran before he heard Nina defending him...

likewise, i cannot help but notice that these three seem to mature rather quickly... at least that's the impression i get

Ash is gonna be in trouble when Ember hear's of what he said, but Nice work! ^^

i eagerly await whats going to happen next :)

I feel a SMACK DOWN COMING ON! >:D

*Rings the Arena Bells* Lets get ready to RUMBLLLLLLLLLE!

in the pink, I mean red corrnerrrrr! weighing in at 365 lb; AAAAAAAAASHHHHH!
in the opposite corrnerrrrrr! weighing in at 2456 lb, please p-p-p-please give it up for the queen of curse, the mistress of mean, give up now for ZZZZZZZZZOOOOOOOOOONNNNOOOOYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!

Jees, lol... trouble in paradise...

I like Zonoya's expression on panel 7

Ho god, this is not slow to exploit.

Funny story, just finished a big test at school, & i read the comic so far while waiting for everyone else to finish. While walking home, i thought, "wonder when she'll post the next page." i get home, and lo and behold! Cant wait to see how it all turns out...

man ive been too into kayla-na's comic

i read this and i was like
"what why is cynder alive again"

Heh, I've read Bittersweet End too, I can certainly distinguish between that and this series. I like both comics( one for a darker, grisly tone, this one for a more complex reason). Well, remember that, besides these updates take anyway.

what

Aww I love Frijir's look at the end

This is the first time I've commented on your page, but I've read your comic since the beginning (way back to the very first chapter, about a couple of years ago). It's a very good read overall, you're an excellent artist and very good at writing the dialogue and plot for your comics, you're very talented. I certainly appreciate the latest chapter, it's emotional and revealing at the same time. Guess I have to wait again for an update but patience is a virtue I live with. Enough said, cheers!

Love the last two panels. Mommy Zonoya is PO'ed. Frijir is adorable!

I knew this was gonna happen x3 a thought ran in my mind at first saying "Aww, Nina's gonna be with Ash? I like her a lot with Frijir!" until then I knew a punch or an angry knockdown is going to come... etc xD... made me go all "Yay!" in a squealy voice in my head <3

my own opinion guys, I sorta prefer Nina 'n Frijir together <3 I'm not shoving it down anyone's throats D-:

Hello shit? This is the fan, you just hit me.

Zonoya is not pleased o3o ooo this is getting interesting

Love this comic!

Oh no, things are getting crazy. Very good so far though!

Jeesh kids these days

hah zonoya in the second to last pannel xD her expression made me lol

and the plot thickens

Ash is in big trouble now.

I cant Waite to see ash get what he deserves.

Beautiful artwork and comic here! I found it through someone elses favorite, and just had to as well. Great looking dragons!

love? I want to see action.

Action? Let there be ACTION!

*Raises his Extra-Large RPBBL (Rocket Propelled Bean Bag Launcher), takes aim, then lets er' rip with a storm of exhaust to crash this party*

I WIN!

poor cute frijir is only wants to be friends

i have been reading most of this comic andd still cant figer ouw to pronounce the kid dragons name that was raized by the birds and his mothers