Mear looked around warily, she usually did not sneak into others homes, it made her nervous. But she was driven by a mix of annoyance and frustration, her friends had been avoiding her and leaving her alone for nearly 2 days. This, as well as the fact that only Viska should be living here right now, her parents chosen for the dedicated sentry team for the village this moon, made her decide to investigate uninvited.
"Viska?" She called out quietly, still nervous. The previous determination she had seeming to have fled her. "Are you in here?"
It was pointless to ask, she was pretty certain she WAS in here. Along with her friends Clere and Tsik. She did not understand what those two saw in Viska. She was younger, yet so stubborn and so bossy to play with. But obviously they had preferred Viska over her, not even inviting her to join them or even told her where they were going!
With a snort and rekindled determination Mear walked deeper into the home, peering around. Were they hiding from her? There! Tsik's bag lay on the floor by the door to the bedroom.
"I know you're in here! Why are you hidi...."
Mear was struck speechless by the sight before her. She had found Viska, the young igwulf lounged on a sofa, blinking sleepilly at her. The young igwulf was sporting quite a belly, her white bellyfur standing out in a poofed manner as the skin beneath it stretched in a dome ontop of her.
Viska yawned slightly and then smacked her lips, emitting a soft chrrble as she shifted in a lazy manner. She smiled at Mear... no she smirked, and in a way that made Mears fur stand slightly on end for some reason.
"Hi Mear.... wasent expecting you..."
"I.. uh.. i was looking for you. What have you eaten!? Where are Tsik and Clere?" Mear exclaimed, half dreading the answer. She couldnt have!
Viska just smiled wider and turned her head towards her belly, putting a paw on it and stroking over it fondly, licking her lips as if in memory over the meal. As if on que a deep glurn rumbled from her gut, causing her to shiver and giggle.
"Guess?" Viska grinned
"You... ate..?" Mear found herself dumbfounded, just staring at that rounded stomach.
"They didnt want to stay... so i made them stay." Viska announced neutrally
"But... why didnt you... s-spit them out before..?"
"Mraur... it just felt so good. They're all mine now.* Viska pushed her paws into her belly, making them sink into the softness, causing an objection in form of a grumble and slosh from the disturbed stomach. There was indeed little left of Tsik and Clere, no doubt Viska had had all night to sleep them off.
Engulfing someone to prove your dominance was common in the village, sometimes someone even got swallowed, but rarely did anyone get eaten.
"You cant tell anyone!" Viska fixed Mear with her eyes, gaze firm and commanding. "No one understands... it feels so good, they're me now, don't you see?"
"But..." Mear flinched, taking a step backwards.
"Don't go! You're going to tell. You must not tell..." The young igwulf glowered.
"I-i wont tell... P-promise!" Viska was frightening, despite being smaller then Mear and quite immobile she was just so intimidating somehow. Viska's copper-red eyes seemed sap away her will to fight her, there was just no point. Part of her knew what it was... but she was simply overwhelmed.
"You wont tell anyone...." Viska reached out her paw, motioning for her 'friend' to come closer, smirk spreading on her lips. "Come here..."
Mear stood motionless and then stepped forward, eyes unable to leave Viska's, except for the brief moment Viska glanced down at her belly, forcing her gaze to follow.
"Come..."
Story by and drawing for
Evoc, of Viska lounging on a couch having devoured two of her ex-best-friends.
It was just going to be a quick doodle this morning to put a mental image Evoc gave me onto a page, but I soon decided that it was too sketch and re-lined it, tinkering with how I draw fur and fuzz, then decided to keep going and colour her. Couldn't let the colour go without toying with how I shade (yet again!), and that came out so surprisingly well and quickly that I just slapped together a sort of entranced background... Actually really proud of the whole thing, considering how little time it ended up taking to make.
Course, it was still roughly a days worth of drawing not toward all the other things that people are waiting for... Evoc is simultaneously an amazing blessing and terrible hinderence on my ability to be productive. XP
Viska ©
Evoc
"Viska?" She called out quietly, still nervous. The previous determination she had seeming to have fled her. "Are you in here?"
It was pointless to ask, she was pretty certain she WAS in here. Along with her friends Clere and Tsik. She did not understand what those two saw in Viska. She was younger, yet so stubborn and so bossy to play with. But obviously they had preferred Viska over her, not even inviting her to join them or even told her where they were going!
With a snort and rekindled determination Mear walked deeper into the home, peering around. Were they hiding from her? There! Tsik's bag lay on the floor by the door to the bedroom.
"I know you're in here! Why are you hidi...."
Mear was struck speechless by the sight before her. She had found Viska, the young igwulf lounged on a sofa, blinking sleepilly at her. The young igwulf was sporting quite a belly, her white bellyfur standing out in a poofed manner as the skin beneath it stretched in a dome ontop of her.
Viska yawned slightly and then smacked her lips, emitting a soft chrrble as she shifted in a lazy manner. She smiled at Mear... no she smirked, and in a way that made Mears fur stand slightly on end for some reason.
"Hi Mear.... wasent expecting you..."
"I.. uh.. i was looking for you. What have you eaten!? Where are Tsik and Clere?" Mear exclaimed, half dreading the answer. She couldnt have!
Viska just smiled wider and turned her head towards her belly, putting a paw on it and stroking over it fondly, licking her lips as if in memory over the meal. As if on que a deep glurn rumbled from her gut, causing her to shiver and giggle.
"Guess?" Viska grinned
"You... ate..?" Mear found herself dumbfounded, just staring at that rounded stomach.
"They didnt want to stay... so i made them stay." Viska announced neutrally
"But... why didnt you... s-spit them out before..?"
"Mraur... it just felt so good. They're all mine now.* Viska pushed her paws into her belly, making them sink into the softness, causing an objection in form of a grumble and slosh from the disturbed stomach. There was indeed little left of Tsik and Clere, no doubt Viska had had all night to sleep them off.
Engulfing someone to prove your dominance was common in the village, sometimes someone even got swallowed, but rarely did anyone get eaten.
"You cant tell anyone!" Viska fixed Mear with her eyes, gaze firm and commanding. "No one understands... it feels so good, they're me now, don't you see?"
"But..." Mear flinched, taking a step backwards.
"Don't go! You're going to tell. You must not tell..." The young igwulf glowered.
"I-i wont tell... P-promise!" Viska was frightening, despite being smaller then Mear and quite immobile she was just so intimidating somehow. Viska's copper-red eyes seemed sap away her will to fight her, there was just no point. Part of her knew what it was... but she was simply overwhelmed.
"You wont tell anyone...." Viska reached out her paw, motioning for her 'friend' to come closer, smirk spreading on her lips. "Come here..."
Mear stood motionless and then stepped forward, eyes unable to leave Viska's, except for the brief moment Viska glanced down at her belly, forcing her gaze to follow.
"Come..."
Story by and drawing for
Evoc, of Viska lounging on a couch having devoured two of her ex-best-friends.It was just going to be a quick doodle this morning to put a mental image Evoc gave me onto a page, but I soon decided that it was too sketch and re-lined it, tinkering with how I draw fur and fuzz, then decided to keep going and colour her. Couldn't let the colour go without toying with how I shade (yet again!), and that came out so surprisingly well and quickly that I just slapped together a sort of entranced background... Actually really proud of the whole thing, considering how little time it ended up taking to make.
Course, it was still roughly a days worth of drawing not toward all the other things that people are waiting for... Evoc is simultaneously an amazing blessing and terrible hinderence on my ability to be productive. XP
Viska ©
Evoc
Category Artwork (Digital) / Vore
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 1080 x 1000px
File Size 1.49 MB
Ya did a amazing job in this one, specially since you say it was just a quick doodle. The lines seems to be bit fuzzy, which sure is cause it's just a quick doodle. But what amazes me is how much you went into the detail of proportions, the belly is proportional very well done and the eyes look extremly natural. Which is a dffect that doesn't come so easy when shaded or coloured digitally.
What needs improvement is the Perspective drawing, it looks good no doub but it's not realy perspective drawn then rather the Coloration and the fuzzy lines making it look like it is~ =3
So Critique to be done i love how the eyes look like and the shine on the face with the cute smirk~ It all looks very natural and i like the decent coloraiton without any colour realy pushing itself out of the Picture to be dominant. Great job on that Piece!
What needs improvement is the Perspective drawing, it looks good no doub but it's not realy perspective drawn then rather the Coloration and the fuzzy lines making it look like it is~ =3
So Critique to be done i love how the eyes look like and the shine on the face with the cute smirk~ It all looks very natural and i like the decent coloraiton without any colour realy pushing itself out of the Picture to be dominant. Great job on that Piece!
Aye, I left the lines a little fuzzy, instead of inking properly... Truth be told, I kinda like 'em like that sometimes. :3 Though, I'll admit, I'd considered making a few little changes and taking out the line layer completely. It's almost to the point where shapes can be made out well without lines at all. Maybe after a bit more practice...
I'm glad my proportions are getting better, too. ^^
My perspectives have always been kinda weak, admittedly... X3 I'm still working at it, but at least the colour and lines are masking it until my practice pays off and perspectives start to really click for me. :3
Thank ya kindly for your critique and comments. Much appreciated. ^^
I'm glad my proportions are getting better, too. ^^
My perspectives have always been kinda weak, admittedly... X3 I'm still working at it, but at least the colour and lines are masking it until my practice pays off and perspectives start to really click for me. :3
Thank ya kindly for your critique and comments. Much appreciated. ^^
I personally think that fuzzy lines having theyr own kind of atractivity about them, specially since they look more natural then work that got digitally overworked with lines. Things that are done with digital lines look most times too static, while the fuzzy lines giving a more natural look of the picture specially on the fur.
And you will get surely better with perspectice drawings, it's probably one of the hardest cases i think. I can only go through the process in my mind, but even there it get's complicate to draw the lines correctly for the right effect. I guess it's a kind of play together with the shading and right proportions how lines are drawn. There exist more then one way to get perspective in a picture and i think you done good job on that one. Not done by lights but by nice shading effects. ;3
Your welcome, Critique sure helps growing in improvement. ^-^
And you will get surely better with perspectice drawings, it's probably one of the hardest cases i think. I can only go through the process in my mind, but even there it get's complicate to draw the lines correctly for the right effect. I guess it's a kind of play together with the shading and right proportions how lines are drawn. There exist more then one way to get perspective in a picture and i think you done good job on that one. Not done by lights but by nice shading effects. ;3
Your welcome, Critique sure helps growing in improvement. ^-^
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