Pens scratched against paper as Lilith and her whole class took their history test, the red-haired Naga tried to keep her tail coiled so it would not move in frustration as she wrote.
"How should I know who the sixth prime-minister was?" Lilith mentally screamed as she looked at her test.
"Mam I am done. I request permission to rest." A monotone voice broke the silence as everyone's attention was drawn to the one who had spoken, the most famous person in the school. Mizune the mouse girl, a short three and a half foot mouse girl with silver hair with matching ears, tail and snow-white skin but strangest of all was the way she talked and acted, she was always bored and monotone like a robot.
"Oh, ya, do whatever you need to get comfy." the teacher replied equally surprised at Mizune. The mouse girl nodded and rose from her desk drawing even more attention from the class. Mizune was famous in the school for her status as MVP, the most voracious predator, so everyone knew that someone was going to be eaten before her nap. The class was completely silent save for Mizune's footsteps as she moved towards the back of the class.
"You." the mouse girl stopped at Lilith, the naga could only stare in horror at the mouse "your coils look comfortable, may I rest in them?"
"Pardon?" the Naga stammered.
"your tail appears to be perfect for resting within therefor I would like you to coil me up so I may rest. I will not interfere with your test." Mizune explained bluntly.
"You don't want to eat me?" Lilith asked jaw-dropped that this was all the mouse wanted.
"would you like me to?"
"No! I was just surprised is all" Lilith exclaimed in panic.
"Then I fail to see a problem, I recommend you decide now lest trouble is started for disrupting the test." The silver mouse replied unphased by the Naga's reply. Lilith just nodded and uncoiled her self Mizune stepped closer to her and nodded, Lilith's tail coiled around the robot-like mouse. Lilith tried to coil her tight enough so Mizune would not complain or fall but not so much that she hurt the mouse.
"Well, I guess get back to the test, sorry for the distraction." the teacher broke the silence, the students eagerly went back to their test, Lilith kept looking back at the already sleeping mouse.
"Lilith? Are you going to head home?" the teacher asked. Lilith looked at the five-foot lizard woman.
"I would but I'm scared to wake Mizune, she might eat me." the naga whimpered.
"She's not evil, she may be the MVP but she only really eats those who are willing, she's not going to break the law just out of boredom." the lizard woman replied "Mizune, wakey, wakey." she poked the sleeping mouse.
"Can I have a muffin? I wannn-" the mouse mumbled. the teacher poked Mizune again.
"Wake up, you're stopping Lilith from going home." Mizune slowly rose from the naga's tail.
"Sorry." the mouse yawned as she crawled from her coils "Thank you for allowing me to sleep within your coils, I have not rested that well in months, may I offer some way of thanks?"
"No, you don't need to thank me, please just get out of my coils." Lilith panicked waving her hands in front of her face.
"very well, but you shall be repaid." the monotone mouse replied.
Lilith slithered her way to history class.
"Lilith, I am glad I found you. I have a request for you." A feminine yet robotic voice made the naga jump, she turned around to find Mizune standing behind her. "I would like to-"
"Please don't eat me!" the naga yelled panicking.
"That's n-"
"I don't want to gurgle! I'm sure you're very nice but I want to at least graduate and-"
"BE SILENT FOR A MINUTE!" the mouse snapped even breaking her normal monotone. Lilith trembled silently "I wanted to thank you for allowing me to sleep in your coils on Wednesday, as a result, I brought these for you." the silver mouse girl pulled a plastic container filled with cookies out of her bag. "I kept naga dietary restrictions in mind, so it should be acceptable unless you had one I was not aware of. Secondly if possible I would like to rest in your coils again today and any other time I get the chance. Should you agree I will also help assist with your history education." the mouse girl's held out the container of cookies as she spoke, "And I promise I will not eat you."
"Than I don't mind, just no eating me alright." Lilith quivered while nervously taking the container. Mizune nodded before entering the classroom. Just as before Mizune finished early and crawled into Lilith's coils to sleep away the class. Unlike the time before though the silver mouse awoke before class ended.
"Mizune, class is over so can I have my tail back?" Lilith asked Mizune responded by popping her head out of the smooth tail.
"Are you a mouse or a meerkat?" the teacher joked.
"Thank you once again," Mizune replied ignoring the joke. "Should I assist you with your school work?" Lilith just shook her head "Very well." the mouse bowed before leaving the class.
Over the next few weeks, this would repeat for the two though Lilith's anxiety around Mizune didn't mellow much. Mizune began to spend more time around the naga for reasons the naga couldn't figure out. Lilith sat coiled up watching an action movie she'ed been wanting to watch, a knock came from the door.
"Coming." the naga called as she paused the film and slithered towards the door. Standing at the door was none other than the robotic mouse girl.
"Good afternoon Lilith. I wanted to speak with you. May I enter?" she stared unblinking at the long red naga who gestured her in.
"Wha, what can I do for you?" Lilith stammered. Mizune sighed before answering the question.
"Though I may fail at conveying it I consider you a friend, so seeing that you are scared that even now I may eat you, it hurts. As a result, I want to show that I have no intention to do such a thing."
"And how are you going to do that?" Lilith asked timidly. Mizune didn't reply instead she sat on her knees.
"What are you doing?"
"Since nothing I say will prove my case, I want you to eat me instead. I trust you enough to not digest me. Now please enjoy your meal." Mizune smiled at the naga.
"Are you sure?"
I trust you, you are my friend whether you realize it so I trust you." Mizune's trust made Lilith feel guilty for doubting her.
Lilith nodded before pulling the mouse close, her mouth widening around Mizune's head. Her mouth fit effortlessly over the smaller mouse girl. In a single gulp, she was already passing the silver mouse's chest. She tasted Mizune's juicy flesh as she worked her way down the MVP of her school.
"I hope I taste satisfactory." Mizune's voice reverberated from inside Lilith's neck, the naga answered by greedily slurping more of the mouse excitedly.
"I am glad." Mizune gently stroked the naga's human stomach before her hands entered her friend's maw. The size difference between them made eating Mizune easier, allowing her to pick up her meal with ease, no need to fear that she might hurt either of them. She leaned her head back allowing the slender mouse to slide down her throat effortlessly. in moments the mouse was nearly gone from view only her feet remained wriggling playfully outside Lilith's mouth. Lilith ran her long tongue across the small girl's even smaller dainty feet before giving a final swallow. The mouse girl's body slid through the long winding body of the naga before arriving in her serpentine stomach. The tight confines pressed against her revealing the stomach's contents down to the minute detail.
"I hope this show's that I mean you no harm, now please enjoy me until I must be removed," Mizune uttered from inside her friend.
"Now I feel like an ass for fearing you so much. I'm sorry." Lilith murmured sadly.
"It is fine, with a reputation like mine this is expected."
(yes, the thumbnail is AI. it's just the only good kind of thumbnail I have)
This is another story that no longer holds with my anthology series, again due to how I use and imply unwilling prey in this story. At the point when I wrote this I didn't have the distaste for it that I do. So It was a much more generic vore world where you could just grab and gulp.
"How should I know who the sixth prime-minister was?" Lilith mentally screamed as she looked at her test.
"Mam I am done. I request permission to rest." A monotone voice broke the silence as everyone's attention was drawn to the one who had spoken, the most famous person in the school. Mizune the mouse girl, a short three and a half foot mouse girl with silver hair with matching ears, tail and snow-white skin but strangest of all was the way she talked and acted, she was always bored and monotone like a robot.
"Oh, ya, do whatever you need to get comfy." the teacher replied equally surprised at Mizune. The mouse girl nodded and rose from her desk drawing even more attention from the class. Mizune was famous in the school for her status as MVP, the most voracious predator, so everyone knew that someone was going to be eaten before her nap. The class was completely silent save for Mizune's footsteps as she moved towards the back of the class.
"You." the mouse girl stopped at Lilith, the naga could only stare in horror at the mouse "your coils look comfortable, may I rest in them?"
"Pardon?" the Naga stammered.
"your tail appears to be perfect for resting within therefor I would like you to coil me up so I may rest. I will not interfere with your test." Mizune explained bluntly.
"You don't want to eat me?" Lilith asked jaw-dropped that this was all the mouse wanted.
"would you like me to?"
"No! I was just surprised is all" Lilith exclaimed in panic.
"Then I fail to see a problem, I recommend you decide now lest trouble is started for disrupting the test." The silver mouse replied unphased by the Naga's reply. Lilith just nodded and uncoiled her self Mizune stepped closer to her and nodded, Lilith's tail coiled around the robot-like mouse. Lilith tried to coil her tight enough so Mizune would not complain or fall but not so much that she hurt the mouse.
"Well, I guess get back to the test, sorry for the distraction." the teacher broke the silence, the students eagerly went back to their test, Lilith kept looking back at the already sleeping mouse.
"Lilith? Are you going to head home?" the teacher asked. Lilith looked at the five-foot lizard woman.
"I would but I'm scared to wake Mizune, she might eat me." the naga whimpered.
"She's not evil, she may be the MVP but she only really eats those who are willing, she's not going to break the law just out of boredom." the lizard woman replied "Mizune, wakey, wakey." she poked the sleeping mouse.
"Can I have a muffin? I wannn-" the mouse mumbled. the teacher poked Mizune again.
"Wake up, you're stopping Lilith from going home." Mizune slowly rose from the naga's tail.
"Sorry." the mouse yawned as she crawled from her coils "Thank you for allowing me to sleep within your coils, I have not rested that well in months, may I offer some way of thanks?"
"No, you don't need to thank me, please just get out of my coils." Lilith panicked waving her hands in front of her face.
"very well, but you shall be repaid." the monotone mouse replied.
Lilith slithered her way to history class.
"Lilith, I am glad I found you. I have a request for you." A feminine yet robotic voice made the naga jump, she turned around to find Mizune standing behind her. "I would like to-"
"Please don't eat me!" the naga yelled panicking.
"That's n-"
"I don't want to gurgle! I'm sure you're very nice but I want to at least graduate and-"
"BE SILENT FOR A MINUTE!" the mouse snapped even breaking her normal monotone. Lilith trembled silently "I wanted to thank you for allowing me to sleep in your coils on Wednesday, as a result, I brought these for you." the silver mouse girl pulled a plastic container filled with cookies out of her bag. "I kept naga dietary restrictions in mind, so it should be acceptable unless you had one I was not aware of. Secondly if possible I would like to rest in your coils again today and any other time I get the chance. Should you agree I will also help assist with your history education." the mouse girl's held out the container of cookies as she spoke, "And I promise I will not eat you."
"Than I don't mind, just no eating me alright." Lilith quivered while nervously taking the container. Mizune nodded before entering the classroom. Just as before Mizune finished early and crawled into Lilith's coils to sleep away the class. Unlike the time before though the silver mouse awoke before class ended.
"Mizune, class is over so can I have my tail back?" Lilith asked Mizune responded by popping her head out of the smooth tail.
"Are you a mouse or a meerkat?" the teacher joked.
"Thank you once again," Mizune replied ignoring the joke. "Should I assist you with your school work?" Lilith just shook her head "Very well." the mouse bowed before leaving the class.
Over the next few weeks, this would repeat for the two though Lilith's anxiety around Mizune didn't mellow much. Mizune began to spend more time around the naga for reasons the naga couldn't figure out. Lilith sat coiled up watching an action movie she'ed been wanting to watch, a knock came from the door.
"Coming." the naga called as she paused the film and slithered towards the door. Standing at the door was none other than the robotic mouse girl.
"Good afternoon Lilith. I wanted to speak with you. May I enter?" she stared unblinking at the long red naga who gestured her in.
"Wha, what can I do for you?" Lilith stammered. Mizune sighed before answering the question.
"Though I may fail at conveying it I consider you a friend, so seeing that you are scared that even now I may eat you, it hurts. As a result, I want to show that I have no intention to do such a thing."
"And how are you going to do that?" Lilith asked timidly. Mizune didn't reply instead she sat on her knees.
"What are you doing?"
"Since nothing I say will prove my case, I want you to eat me instead. I trust you enough to not digest me. Now please enjoy your meal." Mizune smiled at the naga.
"Are you sure?"
I trust you, you are my friend whether you realize it so I trust you." Mizune's trust made Lilith feel guilty for doubting her.
Lilith nodded before pulling the mouse close, her mouth widening around Mizune's head. Her mouth fit effortlessly over the smaller mouse girl. In a single gulp, she was already passing the silver mouse's chest. She tasted Mizune's juicy flesh as she worked her way down the MVP of her school.
"I hope I taste satisfactory." Mizune's voice reverberated from inside Lilith's neck, the naga answered by greedily slurping more of the mouse excitedly.
"I am glad." Mizune gently stroked the naga's human stomach before her hands entered her friend's maw. The size difference between them made eating Mizune easier, allowing her to pick up her meal with ease, no need to fear that she might hurt either of them. She leaned her head back allowing the slender mouse to slide down her throat effortlessly. in moments the mouse was nearly gone from view only her feet remained wriggling playfully outside Lilith's mouth. Lilith ran her long tongue across the small girl's even smaller dainty feet before giving a final swallow. The mouse girl's body slid through the long winding body of the naga before arriving in her serpentine stomach. The tight confines pressed against her revealing the stomach's contents down to the minute detail.
"I hope this show's that I mean you no harm, now please enjoy me until I must be removed," Mizune uttered from inside her friend.
"Now I feel like an ass for fearing you so much. I'm sorry." Lilith murmured sadly.
"It is fine, with a reputation like mine this is expected."
(yes, the thumbnail is AI. it's just the only good kind of thumbnail I have)
This is another story that no longer holds with my anthology series, again due to how I use and imply unwilling prey in this story. At the point when I wrote this I didn't have the distaste for it that I do. So It was a much more generic vore world where you could just grab and gulp.
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glad you liked it.
Not sure I get what you mean, but glad you liked it. I've got a few of the anthology series where I have lamia (though I prefer naga due to lamia being more vampiric within their proper mythology) in them. I think I ended up using naga's quite a few times, which ended up being ironic as within the lore of the series, they're meant to be rare to see. Yet I used them regularly
Not sure I get what you mean, but glad you liked it. I've got a few of the anthology series where I have lamia (though I prefer naga due to lamia being more vampiric within their proper mythology) in them. I think I ended up using naga's quite a few times, which ended up being ironic as within the lore of the series, they're meant to be rare to see. Yet I used them regularly
that's kind of my point. I like to go to the original mythological roots. So for me, Seeing he modern lamia and knowing what they were like in their proper mythology, it just feels like two separate species that should have different names. I mean modern lamia aren't eating babies and ripping their eyes out after all.
Zombies have their own name, but I'm still calling them ghouls.
So I prefer to use naga with my series as it seems to be a more broad term.
Also, here's a fun thing. On a physical level, miia is pretty close to a proper lamia due to her red hair which was important to lamia and vampire type creatures in general. Plus the writer had a whole story arc set in the lamia home land which was located in greece which is the proper home country. Okayado knows his stuff
Zombies have their own name, but I'm still calling them ghouls.
So I prefer to use naga with my series as it seems to be a more broad term.
Also, here's a fun thing. On a physical level, miia is pretty close to a proper lamia due to her red hair which was important to lamia and vampire type creatures in general. Plus the writer had a whole story arc set in the lamia home land which was located in greece which is the proper home country. Okayado knows his stuff
Nervousvampire [in disgust] "UGH! Don't even get me started on Miia, she's creepy, known to be extremely overly protective (which can often lead to injury), a pushover, and on top of that she's known to be easily prone to jealously, which can make her very dangerous, forceful, and downright insane RAPIST at heart. This is the main reason as to exactly why I really DON'T like Miia at all. And there are many out there who do agree with me. She needs to learn to control herself or get some serious help!!! At least centauress warrior Centorea has more control (As shown here when she stops Miia during the middle of the night, by stepping on her tail. OUCH!!!: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/la_W_NsQEmc ).
I have issues with miia. But I don't hate her. My biggest issue is the same one I've found with several good harem lead girls I've read (and unlike many I've read Mon musu not just watched it) she's just boring. She's not interesting. She has a joke or two that just get repeated, but where the other girls started growing and developing character and personality decently fast. Even after multiple story arcs about her, Miia feels as bland as she did back in book one.
As for the rapist part...yeah if we bring up the rapists in the series the only character who isn't is kimihito.
Suu's a serial rapist (AND SHE KNOWS IT'S WRONG)
rachnera has tried (and possibly succeeded on a different character) several times but toned down quick.
centura has had a case or two.
Mero has a few as well as attempted murder.
Papi at least gets the pass she doesn't fully get that it's wrong.
Lala....actually lala is free to go. She's never really done anything like that due to being the least sexual character.
And than there's draco. fuck draco! She's not a main girl but still, fuck her.
Or there's lilith who drives people into sexual lust to any extreme.
There's also the time where kimihito almost got gang raped/kept as a sex slave at a farm
But my point wasn't about miia as a character. It was about that she has a lot of small details that show okayado knew what a real lamia was and wasn't just using the term because that's what snake girls are called right? No, he clearly knew about what a proper lamia was
As for the rapist part...yeah if we bring up the rapists in the series the only character who isn't is kimihito.
Suu's a serial rapist (AND SHE KNOWS IT'S WRONG)
rachnera has tried (and possibly succeeded on a different character) several times but toned down quick.
centura has had a case or two.
Mero has a few as well as attempted murder.
Papi at least gets the pass she doesn't fully get that it's wrong.
Lala....actually lala is free to go. She's never really done anything like that due to being the least sexual character.
And than there's draco. fuck draco! She's not a main girl but still, fuck her.
Or there's lilith who drives people into sexual lust to any extreme.
There's also the time where kimihito almost got gang raped/kept as a sex slave at a farm
But my point wasn't about miia as a character. It was about that she has a lot of small details that show okayado knew what a real lamia was and wasn't just using the term because that's what snake girls are called right? No, he clearly knew about what a proper lamia was
I don't completely hate her, I just hate her personality at times (because she sometimes gets annoying), however she does have a cool snake like tail design in my opinion. I just think they could have done her personality a little bit better in my honest opinion. At least some anime out there, like Macross and Space Battleship Yamato for example, they did much better job with their female characters and love triangle situations.
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