Hm. I've got a lot of mixed feelings on this one.

Plus side:
I really enjoy the melody that comes in at 0:40
Quite like the break at 1:27. Probably the strongest section of the song in my mind.

Critiques:
I would watch your volume on your percussion as a general note. The synth drum kit is definitely the loudest thing in the beginning and end... which really just kind of shows off that it is in fact not a real drum kit.
On the same note, I think your taikos are blowing the monitor, so just try to make sure your mixer bar isn't going into the red.

Good to hear some more music from you.

Thank you for comment, bro.

I thought that "blowing" was fault because of my old headphones. It wasn't....
So, i made a few changes. I'm really sorry and i hope now you'll enjoy it.

Ha, nothing to apologize for. I always blow the monitor while writing. XD It's only on the final render I take it down a notch for other people's ears.