One of my first tf stories. so please comment i need some feed back to see what i should change or work on. im not really the wrighter type so enjoy.
part 2 is here
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5517431
part 3: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5724747
“Man, when is this class going to end?” I said to myself as a banged my forehead on my desk creating a small thud. I turn my head slowly to the clock behind me to see what the time was. “Great it’s 1:57, four more minutes till I get out of this stupid class.” I said to myself, as I began to cross both of my arms as I began to lay my head on them. But just before I was about to get comfortable, I began to notice a small patch of light grey fur slowly emerging out of from the sleeve of my shirt. “What in the hell.” I thought inside my head, as I began to bring my arm closer to me for a further examination. I slowly pulled down my sleeve of my blue thermal revealing my entire arm which was now completely covered in grey and white fur. “What the f@#$!” I blurted out loud, surprise to see what has happened to my arm. “Is there anything wrong Keith?” My Spanish teacher asked as she stopped in the middle of instructing the class. “Oh it’s nothing I thought I saw a spider on my arm that’s all, sorry for swearing I promise it won’t happen again.” I said as I pulled my sleeve back down. “Well let’s just make shore it doesn’t happen again.” She said as she was going back to talking about notes. I than quickly looked back down to my arm, to notice the fur beginning to spread over my hand. I than turned to my left to notice the same action is occurring to the other hand. “Why in the hell is this happening.” I thought to myself as I began to notice five small black like dots began to appear at the palm of my hand. I looked down to my feet to notice that my shoes were slowly beginning to stretch out. My tail bone than started ached, as it felt like something was pulling and tugging on it creating a large amount of pain. I than, reached in my pocket for my I-pod so I can use its glossy screen as a mirror. As I began to put it closer to my face, the fur already began to spread half way across my face. From the corner of my eyes I began to notice that my ears were being misshapen and began to move north.
“Why is this happening?” I thought to myself as I quickly shielded my head under my desk. I than took Another peek at my I-pod to see my face again, but it wasn’t getting any better as I saw the front part of my face beginning to push forward becoming a muzzle. As my face began to ache in complete pain I noticed my shoes began to rip revealing a paw like foot beginning to tear out my shoes. I shut my eyes as hard as I could telling myself this wasn’t real until a large rip came from the back of my pants. “Why!! Me!!” I thought as I brought my I-pod closer to my face. My face was almost done transforming as my hair was slowly being replaced by white fur. I than looked at my eyes through the reflection noticing they had turned a bright baby blue. As Pain on my face slowly began to fade I looked back at the reflection to see a anthro husky staring back at me. The bell began to ring, so I took that as a way to dart out the classroom and make my way out of school before I grab too much attention. I quickly snatched my back backpack and dashed my way to the door as fast as I could. As I made my way through the upstairs hallways, classroom doors began to open with kids ready to go to their next class. I leaped onto the banister and rode it down to the first floor, trying to get out as soon as possible. As I made my way to through the exit, a rush of teenagers began to fill through the campus making it difficult to not be seen. I made my way to the back gate as fast as possible as kids began to take their attention to me. “What the hell is that?” A female student said as I rushed by her as I made my way to the gate.
I griped my paws onto the black fence and began to make my way over to the other side. After I was over I ran across the non busy street and made myself to a dirt lot that was right beside the school surrounded by a chain linked fence covered in tarp. “That may stall some cover for now.” I thought to myself as I hoped over the fence. When I reached the other side of the fence, I took of my torn shoes and threw them across the lot including my socks to make myself comfortable. “How am I going to explain this, to my mom when she gets back from her trip? And even worse explaining this to my sister which may over react and call the police, Dammit why me!!!” I blurted across the dirt lot as, I began to sit down beside the fence. To take my mind off things I took my I-pod out to listen to music to pass time. But sadly my ear buds are too small making them difficult to stay inside my newly formed ears. After an hour of listening to music, the school bell rang releasing all the students to the homes. After a while of watching the kids pass by, I began to hear a familiar voice appear from the distance. “A Fortino do you know where Keith is?” My friend Alex asked as he began to approach Fortino. “Naw man I haven’t seen him, are you shore you just didn’t leave him behind he could be held back in class.” He replied back. “Ya your right I’ma go back before it doesn’t seem that I ditched him.” Alex said walking back to the stop light. “Yo, Alex.” I whispered loudly behind the fence. “Keith is that you?” Alex asked as he began to try to see over the fence. “Ya it’s me, but I need to ask you something.” I said still trying to keep myself hidden behind the tarp. “What’s the question?” He asked with some concern. “If I….let’s say turned into an anthro husky would you freak out an run away?” I replied. “Um…I wouldn’t think so…why are you asking this?” “Oh you’ll see just meet me behind this fence.” Before long Alex began to climb the fence not knowing what’s going to encounter him ahead. He then dropped down to see an anthro husky waving to him in a nervous face gesture. “Holy sh@# for the love of god, who and the f!@# are you!!” Alex yelled out loud as he covered his mouth in shock. “It’s me Keith.” I said as I began to approach him slowly. “No way in hell you’re Keith!! You’re not even remotely like him just go away!! This just can’t be real.” Alex said as he began to back away. “I’m sorry but it is real, and come on I have the same clothes on I had today, come one man please believe me!!” I said trying to get closer to him. “NO!NO!NO!, I refuse just get the F!@# away from me!!!” he said making a run for it. I quickly rushed at him trying to not to let him get away. As we ran through the dirt lot some kind of instinct kicked in, making me run on all fours making it easier for me to catch up. “Oh no you don’t!” I yelled out loud as I made a large leap towards him.
Alex slowly turned his head back noticing a large husky about to pounce onto him through the air, I than grabbed both of his shoulder with my paws and pinned him onto the ground with a distinctive growl making it seem I was going to attack him. “Please don’t kill me!!” he said with tears about to run out his eyes. “I’m not going to kill you! I just want to talk.” I said calmly not trying to provoke him. “I don’t believe you!!, why god me out of all people!! I don’t want to die!!” he said trying to struggle out of my grip. “Dud calm down!” I said trying to keep him down. “Stop talking me like I’m your friend!, because I’m n….ot.” Alex said as he passed out on the floor. “Why faint now!” I said laying him against the fence. After a while of waiting he slowly begins regain consciousness. “Oh man that was some crazy dream I’m so glad its over.” Alex said as he rubbed his eyes. “Sorry but it wasn’t a dream.” I said standing in front of him. His eyes quickly broke open, seeing the same husky from before. “Get away from me!” He said about to get up and sprint. “Oh no you don’t, I’m not finished with you.” I said pushing him back against the fence with my foot. “Please don’t kill me.” He pleaded with tears.“OK first if I wanted to kill you I would have done it by now, don’t you think?”I said calmly. He than stopped squirming and began to calm down but still was on high alert. “Than what are you going to do?” he asked. “Nothing! Which I was trying to tell you before you ran off like last time.” I said with a little irritation “Oh! I’m sorry, well that’s a big relief I’ma tell you that know.”
“Ok since your calm I was trying to tell you that it’s me Keith.”
“No way! I don’t believe it.”
“I can prove it.”
“Ok than prove it!”
“At Palm a girl pulled down your pants in front of a whole group of kids. In 9th grade I managed to get over thirteen kids to punch you on your birthday, and your writing a furry vs human story, good enough.”
“Ok one last thing, what year is my Celica?”
“ It’s a eighty-four, white, two door , it looks like crap and its dead.”
“Oh my god dud!!!,it really is you how did this happen?”
“I don’t know why it happen, I just only know when and how it started,” I said leaning against the fence beside him. “Dud that sucks!!” he said turning his head towards my direction. “Ya it does well let’s talk about this on the way home.” I said picking up my backpack. “kk!”
“Oh and Alex, I need your hoody I don’t want anybody giving strange looks on the way home.”
“Oh shore thing.”
After awhile of explaining what happen on the way home I began to fear more and more, were I was going to stay? “Alex can I crash at your place for a bit?” I asked politely. “Dud come on really it’s bad enough I have three dogs and a cat, but to sleep over I don’t know,” he said shaking his head. “Come on Please I don’t want my sis to freak out and call the police, and my mom is out on a trip for a month so that should give me enough time to stall.” I suggested. “Ok even though if we did how can I explain this to my dad.” He replied back. Well just say that your dog sitting for someone, an every time he comes in your room I just poke my head and tail out from under your bed making it seem like it’s a ordinary husky, it haves to work.” “I don’t know it sounds risky.” Alex replied sounding worried. “Just trust me I have it all under control.” After a while of planning we finally were prepared for what came to use next. “Keith! My dad is hear quick get under the bed.” He demanded as footsteps neared towards the bedroom. I quickly leaped off the bed and hid under it, undetected as the door slowly began to open. “Hay dad can I ask you something?” Alex asked nervously. “well a friend of mine is out of town and he wanted me take care of his dog , so I wonder if he can stay in my room since he’s not used to the outside.” His dad than began to chuckle as Alex continued to talk to him.
“Is he paying you?”
“yes, when he gets back”
“how, much?”
“I don’t know forty for this weekend, I think.”
“Ok fine, he stay inside.”
“Oh, Thanks dad, thank you, thank you, thank you!!,”
“So where is the dog?”
“Oh he’s under my bed sleeping.”
“Show me.”
“Ok, -whistle- a Blitz! Come out boy!” Alex said as he clapped his hands to get my attention. I than slowly poked my head out from under the bed and looked upwards at him and his dad. “Why isn’t he getting out from under there?” His father asked looking down at me. “Oh he’s just shy around strangers that’s all.” Alex replied back. “Ok well make shore he doesn’t make any noise, I have a head ached.” He said entering his room. “I told you it was going to work.” I whispered to Alex. As few days past it was Sunday and the day was just about to end. I walked around the house a little irritable thinking of what my mom would say. “A Keith you’re not looking so well you haven’t spoken all day.” He asked with a little of concern. “Sorry Alex but I’m just worried how my life is going to be like if I’m stuck like this, that’s all.” I replied back worried. “DO you want talk about it?” “Naw its ok, I’ma just head outside.” “Without a hoody!!” Alex asked surprisingly. “Ya, beyond this point I really don’t care.” On my way walking past wall greens, A strange figure in a dark black hoddie began to approach me as I made my way through the parking lot. “So How’s my little husky doing?” a feminine voice came from behind. I turned around to see a female in her late twenty’s approaching me from the distance. “Hang on you did this to me?” I asked very irritated. “Yes I did, but before you do or say anything I would like you to make a deal with you.” She said pulling out three small tablets out her pocket. “What kind of deal?” I asked. “if you become my partner, I will think of changing you back.”
“Partner of what exactly?”
“Trust me you’ll see, You see these three tablets in my hand?”
“ya,”
“Well each one will turn you into your human form but only for fifteen hours, the more missions I tell you to do and the more you do correctly I may change you back.”
“and if I don’t want to?”
“then be an anthro husky for the rest of your life.”
“OK fine I agree.” Like I didn’t have a choice. “just be a good dog, and do everything I say” she says as she throws me the tablets.
part 2 is here
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5517431
part 3: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5724747
“Man, when is this class going to end?” I said to myself as a banged my forehead on my desk creating a small thud. I turn my head slowly to the clock behind me to see what the time was. “Great it’s 1:57, four more minutes till I get out of this stupid class.” I said to myself, as I began to cross both of my arms as I began to lay my head on them. But just before I was about to get comfortable, I began to notice a small patch of light grey fur slowly emerging out of from the sleeve of my shirt. “What in the hell.” I thought inside my head, as I began to bring my arm closer to me for a further examination. I slowly pulled down my sleeve of my blue thermal revealing my entire arm which was now completely covered in grey and white fur. “What the f@#$!” I blurted out loud, surprise to see what has happened to my arm. “Is there anything wrong Keith?” My Spanish teacher asked as she stopped in the middle of instructing the class. “Oh it’s nothing I thought I saw a spider on my arm that’s all, sorry for swearing I promise it won’t happen again.” I said as I pulled my sleeve back down. “Well let’s just make shore it doesn’t happen again.” She said as she was going back to talking about notes. I than quickly looked back down to my arm, to notice the fur beginning to spread over my hand. I than turned to my left to notice the same action is occurring to the other hand. “Why in the hell is this happening.” I thought to myself as I began to notice five small black like dots began to appear at the palm of my hand. I looked down to my feet to notice that my shoes were slowly beginning to stretch out. My tail bone than started ached, as it felt like something was pulling and tugging on it creating a large amount of pain. I than, reached in my pocket for my I-pod so I can use its glossy screen as a mirror. As I began to put it closer to my face, the fur already began to spread half way across my face. From the corner of my eyes I began to notice that my ears were being misshapen and began to move north.
“Why is this happening?” I thought to myself as I quickly shielded my head under my desk. I than took Another peek at my I-pod to see my face again, but it wasn’t getting any better as I saw the front part of my face beginning to push forward becoming a muzzle. As my face began to ache in complete pain I noticed my shoes began to rip revealing a paw like foot beginning to tear out my shoes. I shut my eyes as hard as I could telling myself this wasn’t real until a large rip came from the back of my pants. “Why!! Me!!” I thought as I brought my I-pod closer to my face. My face was almost done transforming as my hair was slowly being replaced by white fur. I than looked at my eyes through the reflection noticing they had turned a bright baby blue. As Pain on my face slowly began to fade I looked back at the reflection to see a anthro husky staring back at me. The bell began to ring, so I took that as a way to dart out the classroom and make my way out of school before I grab too much attention. I quickly snatched my back backpack and dashed my way to the door as fast as I could. As I made my way through the upstairs hallways, classroom doors began to open with kids ready to go to their next class. I leaped onto the banister and rode it down to the first floor, trying to get out as soon as possible. As I made my way to through the exit, a rush of teenagers began to fill through the campus making it difficult to not be seen. I made my way to the back gate as fast as possible as kids began to take their attention to me. “What the hell is that?” A female student said as I rushed by her as I made my way to the gate.
I griped my paws onto the black fence and began to make my way over to the other side. After I was over I ran across the non busy street and made myself to a dirt lot that was right beside the school surrounded by a chain linked fence covered in tarp. “That may stall some cover for now.” I thought to myself as I hoped over the fence. When I reached the other side of the fence, I took of my torn shoes and threw them across the lot including my socks to make myself comfortable. “How am I going to explain this, to my mom when she gets back from her trip? And even worse explaining this to my sister which may over react and call the police, Dammit why me!!!” I blurted across the dirt lot as, I began to sit down beside the fence. To take my mind off things I took my I-pod out to listen to music to pass time. But sadly my ear buds are too small making them difficult to stay inside my newly formed ears. After an hour of listening to music, the school bell rang releasing all the students to the homes. After a while of watching the kids pass by, I began to hear a familiar voice appear from the distance. “A Fortino do you know where Keith is?” My friend Alex asked as he began to approach Fortino. “Naw man I haven’t seen him, are you shore you just didn’t leave him behind he could be held back in class.” He replied back. “Ya your right I’ma go back before it doesn’t seem that I ditched him.” Alex said walking back to the stop light. “Yo, Alex.” I whispered loudly behind the fence. “Keith is that you?” Alex asked as he began to try to see over the fence. “Ya it’s me, but I need to ask you something.” I said still trying to keep myself hidden behind the tarp. “What’s the question?” He asked with some concern. “If I….let’s say turned into an anthro husky would you freak out an run away?” I replied. “Um…I wouldn’t think so…why are you asking this?” “Oh you’ll see just meet me behind this fence.” Before long Alex began to climb the fence not knowing what’s going to encounter him ahead. He then dropped down to see an anthro husky waving to him in a nervous face gesture. “Holy sh@# for the love of god, who and the f!@# are you!!” Alex yelled out loud as he covered his mouth in shock. “It’s me Keith.” I said as I began to approach him slowly. “No way in hell you’re Keith!! You’re not even remotely like him just go away!! This just can’t be real.” Alex said as he began to back away. “I’m sorry but it is real, and come on I have the same clothes on I had today, come one man please believe me!!” I said trying to get closer to him. “NO!NO!NO!, I refuse just get the F!@# away from me!!!” he said making a run for it. I quickly rushed at him trying to not to let him get away. As we ran through the dirt lot some kind of instinct kicked in, making me run on all fours making it easier for me to catch up. “Oh no you don’t!” I yelled out loud as I made a large leap towards him.
Alex slowly turned his head back noticing a large husky about to pounce onto him through the air, I than grabbed both of his shoulder with my paws and pinned him onto the ground with a distinctive growl making it seem I was going to attack him. “Please don’t kill me!!” he said with tears about to run out his eyes. “I’m not going to kill you! I just want to talk.” I said calmly not trying to provoke him. “I don’t believe you!!, why god me out of all people!! I don’t want to die!!” he said trying to struggle out of my grip. “Dud calm down!” I said trying to keep him down. “Stop talking me like I’m your friend!, because I’m n….ot.” Alex said as he passed out on the floor. “Why faint now!” I said laying him against the fence. After a while of waiting he slowly begins regain consciousness. “Oh man that was some crazy dream I’m so glad its over.” Alex said as he rubbed his eyes. “Sorry but it wasn’t a dream.” I said standing in front of him. His eyes quickly broke open, seeing the same husky from before. “Get away from me!” He said about to get up and sprint. “Oh no you don’t, I’m not finished with you.” I said pushing him back against the fence with my foot. “Please don’t kill me.” He pleaded with tears.“OK first if I wanted to kill you I would have done it by now, don’t you think?”I said calmly. He than stopped squirming and began to calm down but still was on high alert. “Than what are you going to do?” he asked. “Nothing! Which I was trying to tell you before you ran off like last time.” I said with a little irritation “Oh! I’m sorry, well that’s a big relief I’ma tell you that know.”
“Ok since your calm I was trying to tell you that it’s me Keith.”
“No way! I don’t believe it.”
“I can prove it.”
“Ok than prove it!”
“At Palm a girl pulled down your pants in front of a whole group of kids. In 9th grade I managed to get over thirteen kids to punch you on your birthday, and your writing a furry vs human story, good enough.”
“Ok one last thing, what year is my Celica?”
“ It’s a eighty-four, white, two door , it looks like crap and its dead.”
“Oh my god dud!!!,it really is you how did this happen?”
“I don’t know why it happen, I just only know when and how it started,” I said leaning against the fence beside him. “Dud that sucks!!” he said turning his head towards my direction. “Ya it does well let’s talk about this on the way home.” I said picking up my backpack. “kk!”
“Oh and Alex, I need your hoody I don’t want anybody giving strange looks on the way home.”
“Oh shore thing.”
After awhile of explaining what happen on the way home I began to fear more and more, were I was going to stay? “Alex can I crash at your place for a bit?” I asked politely. “Dud come on really it’s bad enough I have three dogs and a cat, but to sleep over I don’t know,” he said shaking his head. “Come on Please I don’t want my sis to freak out and call the police, and my mom is out on a trip for a month so that should give me enough time to stall.” I suggested. “Ok even though if we did how can I explain this to my dad.” He replied back. Well just say that your dog sitting for someone, an every time he comes in your room I just poke my head and tail out from under your bed making it seem like it’s a ordinary husky, it haves to work.” “I don’t know it sounds risky.” Alex replied sounding worried. “Just trust me I have it all under control.” After a while of planning we finally were prepared for what came to use next. “Keith! My dad is hear quick get under the bed.” He demanded as footsteps neared towards the bedroom. I quickly leaped off the bed and hid under it, undetected as the door slowly began to open. “Hay dad can I ask you something?” Alex asked nervously. “well a friend of mine is out of town and he wanted me take care of his dog , so I wonder if he can stay in my room since he’s not used to the outside.” His dad than began to chuckle as Alex continued to talk to him.
“Is he paying you?”
“yes, when he gets back”
“how, much?”
“I don’t know forty for this weekend, I think.”
“Ok fine, he stay inside.”
“Oh, Thanks dad, thank you, thank you, thank you!!,”
“So where is the dog?”
“Oh he’s under my bed sleeping.”
“Show me.”
“Ok, -whistle- a Blitz! Come out boy!” Alex said as he clapped his hands to get my attention. I than slowly poked my head out from under the bed and looked upwards at him and his dad. “Why isn’t he getting out from under there?” His father asked looking down at me. “Oh he’s just shy around strangers that’s all.” Alex replied back. “Ok well make shore he doesn’t make any noise, I have a head ached.” He said entering his room. “I told you it was going to work.” I whispered to Alex. As few days past it was Sunday and the day was just about to end. I walked around the house a little irritable thinking of what my mom would say. “A Keith you’re not looking so well you haven’t spoken all day.” He asked with a little of concern. “Sorry Alex but I’m just worried how my life is going to be like if I’m stuck like this, that’s all.” I replied back worried. “DO you want talk about it?” “Naw its ok, I’ma just head outside.” “Without a hoody!!” Alex asked surprisingly. “Ya, beyond this point I really don’t care.” On my way walking past wall greens, A strange figure in a dark black hoddie began to approach me as I made my way through the parking lot. “So How’s my little husky doing?” a feminine voice came from behind. I turned around to see a female in her late twenty’s approaching me from the distance. “Hang on you did this to me?” I asked very irritated. “Yes I did, but before you do or say anything I would like you to make a deal with you.” She said pulling out three small tablets out her pocket. “What kind of deal?” I asked. “if you become my partner, I will think of changing you back.”
“Partner of what exactly?”
“Trust me you’ll see, You see these three tablets in my hand?”
“ya,”
“Well each one will turn you into your human form but only for fifteen hours, the more missions I tell you to do and the more you do correctly I may change you back.”
“and if I don’t want to?”
“then be an anthro husky for the rest of your life.”
“OK fine I agree.” Like I didn’t have a choice. “just be a good dog, and do everything I say” she says as she throws me the tablets.
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