And it's not about weed, stoners. :V
This is taking the place of that stream I couldn't do. Sorry about that by the way, FLS can be a jerk to my system sometimes. :<
Anyway, this is an old song from forever ago, and in the process of laziness I didn't really tweak it too much, so alot of the tracks have minor flaws, like the lead guitar playing on the highest strings again, that I plan to fix in the future, since I still like this as-is.
The original song was about how we lose freedoms every day in the US to our "State Representatives" and the like who are only concerned with themselves and the rich. But my lyrics were failure so I am changing it up. It has a very aggressive/sad tone to it, so I figured I would try to go for the money theme I have been trying to work into my songs for a while now.
I HOPE to overlay some lyrics and make them sound badass and stuff, but if that doesn't pan out I'll leave it as an instrumental again.
For now, please tell me what you think! Anything you think is a valid critique; you don't need to be a music major to tell a musician if you think their song is "nice because of how it is so ambient" or "bad because it is to cluttered/messy".
I am working a bunch of new things into this, like individual reverb for each track so they sound more realistic. More sloppiness on the guitars so it doesn't sound like a robot playing it. That kind of stuff.
There will be some minor edits when the final track comes out, like compression and more equalization, but for the most part the instrumental track will sound like this completed, so don't worry about telling me what you think because it isn't finished yet. :>
I'm not looking for ass-kisses, I am looking for your honest opinion.
Thanks! and enjoy! :3
Created: October 01, 2010 by
Rockability
Edited on: March 28th, 2011 by
Rockability
All Rights Reserved - International Copyright Secured
This is taking the place of that stream I couldn't do. Sorry about that by the way, FLS can be a jerk to my system sometimes. :<
Anyway, this is an old song from forever ago, and in the process of laziness I didn't really tweak it too much, so alot of the tracks have minor flaws, like the lead guitar playing on the highest strings again, that I plan to fix in the future, since I still like this as-is.
The original song was about how we lose freedoms every day in the US to our "State Representatives" and the like who are only concerned with themselves and the rich. But my lyrics were failure so I am changing it up. It has a very aggressive/sad tone to it, so I figured I would try to go for the money theme I have been trying to work into my songs for a while now.
I HOPE to overlay some lyrics and make them sound badass and stuff, but if that doesn't pan out I'll leave it as an instrumental again.
For now, please tell me what you think! Anything you think is a valid critique; you don't need to be a music major to tell a musician if you think their song is "nice because of how it is so ambient" or "bad because it is to cluttered/messy".
I am working a bunch of new things into this, like individual reverb for each track so they sound more realistic. More sloppiness on the guitars so it doesn't sound like a robot playing it. That kind of stuff.
There will be some minor edits when the final track comes out, like compression and more equalization, but for the most part the instrumental track will sound like this completed, so don't worry about telling me what you think because it isn't finished yet. :>
I'm not looking for ass-kisses, I am looking for your honest opinion.
Thanks! and enjoy! :3
Created: October 01, 2010 by
RockabilityEdited on: March 28th, 2011 by
RockabilityAll Rights Reserved - International Copyright Secured
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