I recently commissioned my friend WhiteGuardian to do an HD redraw of one of my favorite comics by TvCrip!
This one:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54075666/
Aaaah! It's me, Cory! (In cartoon form) And I'm being flattened into a major shortstack! Now redrawn, and remastered, with detailed shading and shine on my smushed body as I'm being squashed! >w<
Here is the original description/story:
Oh no! I'm being squashed shorter and shorter! As a big metal beam (or piston) is smashing down HARD on my head!
Look how much smaller I become in each panel. I go from about 4 feet, to not even an inch tall in height! (Except for my feets and eyeballs sticking up) -w-
By the end of it, I'm such a TINY little barefoot shorty-pancake! I'm SO small, wide, and flat! >w<
Panel 1: Hey Cory... Look up!
Cory: "Oh.... SHIT!"
Panel 2: As the beam hits on my head, I wince, gritting my teeth, as I can feel my body compressing and shrinking. I'm becoming a little shortstack, as theres nothing I can do to get the beam off my head! It's too heavy, and the force of it pushing down on me is much too strong! As the beam bears down on me, I can feel myself shrinking down smaller!
Panel 3: Ouch! My face says it all. Lol
As the beam squishes my body out wider, flatter, and shorter, my belly and feets start to bulge out REALLY big! And my anxious, nervous eyeballs are starting to wall out huge too. I'm also beginning to feel extremely dizzy. But I can't fall over, because the beam is holding me down! Lol. The pressure on my head and body is so intense. I can feel every part of my body sinking and folding into itself, as I'm becoming flatter by the second! (It really does feel like sinking. Because I'm going lower and lower to the ground. But it's just me shrinking from getting squashed by the beam. And I feel so small!)
I can't believe this is happening to me! It's too much!!
Panel 4: At the end, the beam smashed me right into the ground completely. I'm left pancaked into a tiny little disc, with my head and face all smashed out, and crushed bare feet sticking up! I'm pinned right to the floor. That pressure straining on me from the beam is so powerful that my bloodshot, red eyeballs are now bulging out so big from my squished-in face! Nearly POPPING right out of the sockets!
Someone, anyone, please come save me! Or I'll be PERMANENTLY pancaked! Lol
(Better be quick about it too. I don't know how much longer I can handle this beam smushing me! I'm already as tiny and flat as any toon could possibly become!) >_<
If someone ever does manage to get that beam off of me, then they better have a spatula, because I think you're gonna need to peel me up off the ground. I'm stuck pretty good!
Even if I do get rescued, I'll still be stuck as a barefoot, googly-eyed pancake for quite a while! x3
Either way, here's a fact, I'm smashed flat, and that's that!
Hope you like this redraw, and TvCrip's original version too! :)
This one:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/54075666/
Aaaah! It's me, Cory! (In cartoon form) And I'm being flattened into a major shortstack! Now redrawn, and remastered, with detailed shading and shine on my smushed body as I'm being squashed! >w<
Here is the original description/story:
Oh no! I'm being squashed shorter and shorter! As a big metal beam (or piston) is smashing down HARD on my head!
Look how much smaller I become in each panel. I go from about 4 feet, to not even an inch tall in height! (Except for my feets and eyeballs sticking up) -w-
By the end of it, I'm such a TINY little barefoot shorty-pancake! I'm SO small, wide, and flat! >w<
Panel 1: Hey Cory... Look up!
Cory: "Oh.... SHIT!"
Panel 2: As the beam hits on my head, I wince, gritting my teeth, as I can feel my body compressing and shrinking. I'm becoming a little shortstack, as theres nothing I can do to get the beam off my head! It's too heavy, and the force of it pushing down on me is much too strong! As the beam bears down on me, I can feel myself shrinking down smaller!
Panel 3: Ouch! My face says it all. Lol
As the beam squishes my body out wider, flatter, and shorter, my belly and feets start to bulge out REALLY big! And my anxious, nervous eyeballs are starting to wall out huge too. I'm also beginning to feel extremely dizzy. But I can't fall over, because the beam is holding me down! Lol. The pressure on my head and body is so intense. I can feel every part of my body sinking and folding into itself, as I'm becoming flatter by the second! (It really does feel like sinking. Because I'm going lower and lower to the ground. But it's just me shrinking from getting squashed by the beam. And I feel so small!)
I can't believe this is happening to me! It's too much!!
Panel 4: At the end, the beam smashed me right into the ground completely. I'm left pancaked into a tiny little disc, with my head and face all smashed out, and crushed bare feet sticking up! I'm pinned right to the floor. That pressure straining on me from the beam is so powerful that my bloodshot, red eyeballs are now bulging out so big from my squished-in face! Nearly POPPING right out of the sockets!
Someone, anyone, please come save me! Or I'll be PERMANENTLY pancaked! Lol
(Better be quick about it too. I don't know how much longer I can handle this beam smushing me! I'm already as tiny and flat as any toon could possibly become!) >_<
If someone ever does manage to get that beam off of me, then they better have a spatula, because I think you're gonna need to peel me up off the ground. I'm stuck pretty good!
Even if I do get rescued, I'll still be stuck as a barefoot, googly-eyed pancake for quite a while! x3
Either way, here's a fact, I'm smashed flat, and that's that!
Hope you like this redraw, and TvCrip's original version too! :)
Category All / Comics
Species Human
Size 1752 x 2103px
File Size 2.4 MB
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