
Hey guys, I'm posting a mini story I wrote to see how it goes. It's short but still want to share it. I hope you like it ^^
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We find ourselves in the great city of Zootropolis, where anthropomorphic animals live peacefully, carrying out their daily activities as if it were any other ordinary day. Cars were moving into different directions, some children running in the park, young people on their bicycles, others with headphones listening to music, some adults chatting, some couples in a café enjoying their lunch. Nothing unusual.
That calm moment was interrupted by an explosion at the city's main bank. Masked robbers with sacks of money and what seemed to be some modified firearms threatened civilians and workers and after taking all the money, they were trying to escape in their car which was driven by one of their partners waiting to get out of there as fast as possible.
This attempted robbery would have ended there if not for a mysterious figure watching them from the rooftop of a building in front of the bank. In a matter of seconds, this individual flew towards the criminals, stopped the vehicle with the palm of their hand, opened its roof as if it were a fruit can, and pulled the thieves out, tossing them to the ground. Between all the confusion, the criminals recognized the mysterious figure and tried to use their advanced weapons, but the figure swiftly disarmed them, effortlessly breaking their weapons in two. In a quick motion, the figure delivered a slow, powerful blow to each, disorienting them without causing permanent harm.
Some police cars arrived at the scene, and after a conversation between the hero and the officers, the criminals were taken to the police station.
Some civilians who had been inside the bank came out, seeing that the situation was under control, and thanked their hero.
- “Thank you, AtomicFox, we can always count on you!"
- "You're the pride of Zootropolis."
The hero, revealed to be a fox with orange fur and red hair in a tight-fitting red, black, and blue costume, thanked them for the compliments, mentioning that they could always count on him when he was around. After a farewell gesture and closing one of his eyes, he flew off into the blue sky.
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We find ourselves in the great city of Zootropolis, where anthropomorphic animals live peacefully, carrying out their daily activities as if it were any other ordinary day. Cars were moving into different directions, some children running in the park, young people on their bicycles, others with headphones listening to music, some adults chatting, some couples in a café enjoying their lunch. Nothing unusual.
That calm moment was interrupted by an explosion at the city's main bank. Masked robbers with sacks of money and what seemed to be some modified firearms threatened civilians and workers and after taking all the money, they were trying to escape in their car which was driven by one of their partners waiting to get out of there as fast as possible.
This attempted robbery would have ended there if not for a mysterious figure watching them from the rooftop of a building in front of the bank. In a matter of seconds, this individual flew towards the criminals, stopped the vehicle with the palm of their hand, opened its roof as if it were a fruit can, and pulled the thieves out, tossing them to the ground. Between all the confusion, the criminals recognized the mysterious figure and tried to use their advanced weapons, but the figure swiftly disarmed them, effortlessly breaking their weapons in two. In a quick motion, the figure delivered a slow, powerful blow to each, disorienting them without causing permanent harm.
Some police cars arrived at the scene, and after a conversation between the hero and the officers, the criminals were taken to the police station.
Some civilians who had been inside the bank came out, seeing that the situation was under control, and thanked their hero.
- “Thank you, AtomicFox, we can always count on you!"
- "You're the pride of Zootropolis."
The hero, revealed to be a fox with orange fur and red hair in a tight-fitting red, black, and blue costume, thanked them for the compliments, mentioning that they could always count on him when he was around. After a farewell gesture and closing one of his eyes, he flew off into the blue sky.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 13 kB
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