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Just a funny story about a stranger who decided to take a look in a cozy little tavern but the Fate had a different plan on him.
Don't forget to check my account for more stories I keep to tell. Feel free to offer and request your own ideas, concepts for poems you'd want to see and read in comments, notes and DMs on discord, use them for your own creativity and works! Everything is absolutely free^^
Don't forget to check my account for more stories I keep to tell. Feel free to offer and request your own ideas, concepts for poems you'd want to see and read in comments, notes and DMs on discord, use them for your own creativity and works! Everything is absolutely free^^
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Is the moral to not drink unlabeled wine? What foul potion or witch's brew was beset upon thee? Lest I remain wary of its form, I fear this fate will also befall me.
I love how you do so much with so little, letting readers imaginations wonder. And the shift from third to first person was so subtle. I missed it and had to go search for it during a second read
I love how you do so much with so little, letting readers imaginations wonder. And the shift from third to first person was so subtle. I missed it and had to go search for it during a second read
Thank you so so much, Ryuji^•^
I'm very happy to know that my switch of POV turned to be so gentle and impressive, I actually do it a lot in my poems, but yeah - that's probably the best one among them.
And about a moral - everyone can find their own lesson in this story. For me... There's no moral, that's supposed to be just a story and sometimes it's very impressive what people can find even in such ones.
I'm very happy to know that my switch of POV turned to be so gentle and impressive, I actually do it a lot in my poems, but yeah - that's probably the best one among them.
And about a moral - everyone can find their own lesson in this story. For me... There's no moral, that's supposed to be just a story and sometimes it's very impressive what people can find even in such ones.
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