
D'vah dodge an arrow
Just wanted to practice some dynamic pose, This is D’vah, my sister’s sona, she originally came from the 2nd dnd campaign we played with each other, so…while I haven’t written down her story yet, expect to see a story of her in the future.
As for the art, I don’t feel too happy about the dynamic of the picture yet, I must’ve done something wrong, or don’t know of something. So if you have anything to criticize, I would be more than welcome!!!
Have a nice day.
As for the art, I don’t feel too happy about the dynamic of the picture yet, I must’ve done something wrong, or don’t know of something. So if you have anything to criticize, I would be more than welcome!!!
Have a nice day.
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Heya! Yeah - the idea, anatomy, details and background look great.
But the dynamic pose does look bit off (not expert saying if this the best, but I'll give one opinion); she could had her head and back curving more to backwards while having her feet more steady on the ground. As it now, she seems to be jumping back more that bending back to dodge the arrow. Bending forward's alternative pose
One of those pictures that I had to distort my body to think about the pose again
But the dynamic pose does look bit off (not expert saying if this the best, but I'll give one opinion); she could had her head and back curving more to backwards while having her feet more steady on the ground. As it now, she seems to be jumping back more that bending back to dodge the arrow. Bending forward's alternative pose
One of those pictures that I had to distort my body to think about the pose again
You are becoming everytime more good.
Then the background is amazing, I guess how much time did you spent on it.
Then, I'm not an anatomy master I have more to learn too, but if you accept suggestion, is the right arm, the shoulder appears too moved out, moving all the arm
(I've got an idea, you could use scrap gallery to upload sketches, to get suggestions and fix tips)
Then the background is amazing, I guess how much time did you spent on it.
Then, I'm not an anatomy master I have more to learn too, but if you accept suggestion, is the right arm, the shoulder appears too moved out, moving all the arm
(I've got an idea, you could use scrap gallery to upload sketches, to get suggestions and fix tips)
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