
A picture commissioned by lyndane of thelostwolf looking very
pretty for a nice evening *w*
Samantha is ©
thelostwolf
Art ©
herro
Category All / Fat Furs
Species Wolf
Size 724 x 1000px
File Size 699.6 kB
Very nice sense of detail on the intricate swirl pattern of her clothing as well as the curves/pudge of her belly and upper torso. I think the slight sheen of her claws, the coloration of her hair, everything about the tongue (which was cute imo), and the eyes all turned out very lovely.
Out of curiousity though, what is your opinion regarding constructive critique?
Out of curiousity though, what is your opinion regarding constructive critique?
With all due respect, it appears Samantha’s left thigh (right thigh to the viewer) is short for its length. If possible to change at this point (and desired to do so of course) I feel that perhaps lengthening the thigh so the knee is positioned almost halfway covering the thigh/butt area of the other leg would have a more correct length.
If that change is more difficult to change at this point, an alternative would be moving the kneecap more to our right (more centered) which may work for a sense of foreshortening of the thigh towards the viewer – but this would also require a slight adjustment to the curve of the calf and possibly to the position of the foot too (but one could say she’s twisting her foot inward which could work).
Again, this is if possible to and desired to change, but in any case I hope this is helpful to you in the future. :)
If that change is more difficult to change at this point, an alternative would be moving the kneecap more to our right (more centered) which may work for a sense of foreshortening of the thigh towards the viewer – but this would also require a slight adjustment to the curve of the calf and possibly to the position of the foot too (but one could say she’s twisting her foot inward which could work).
Again, this is if possible to and desired to change, but in any case I hope this is helpful to you in the future. :)
Neef is the sound that
thelostwolf makes when she's wobbled, or surprised, or falling over, or hungry, or scared, or just for the hell of it.

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