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This picture is just embarrassing >____> Good thing you can't see it :)
If you really want to see the picture, I'll post up the full version. Viewer beware. Terrible artwork.
You have been warned.
I didn't go for a full fix up, but I erased the stuff on the back...gotta stop using two sides to draw...
Meh, whatever. My original idea, and I like it!
Climax, too short? IDK, they always seem longer when I'm typing them.
CnC please.
If you really want to see the picture, I'll post up the full version. Viewer beware. Terrible artwork.
You have been warned.
I didn't go for a full fix up, but I erased the stuff on the back...gotta stop using two sides to draw...
Meh, whatever. My original idea, and I like it!
Climax, too short? IDK, they always seem longer when I'm typing them.
CnC please.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 88px
File Size 36.5 kB
Nice story, the idea was pretty original, but I did feel that the ending was a bit too abrupt. I kind of want to know what happened after you were sucked under, did they pull you out? Or was that the end for you? The story could go either way. Also, it could use a few more details to keep it from going too fast, we don't know anything about the characters other than name and gender! :P
Other than that I liked the story, you're not that bad at drawing either, a little more practice and you'll be great at both writing and drawing! :D
Other than that I liked the story, you're not that bad at drawing either, a little more practice and you'll be great at both writing and drawing! :D
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