She's such a hardcore. <3

Her right foot is backwards though? I really like how this looks though. I hope you finish it.

Thanks for pointing that out. I was too aggravated with the rest of the picture to notice.

I really like it, I'm sorry it caused you so much stress. :c

would you like a redline? I'm bored and I think I see what you're trying to do with legs.

Sure, couldnt hurt..

I know it's been forever, but I finally did it: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5596278/

take it as a general guideline, I had to guess at your intentions - you're the artist!

Stupid work and homework eating up all of my time. I had been meaning to comment on this for a week now. I really wanted to give it more than just my first impression.

Composition wise, I love it. Overall, I think you have done a good job with the anatomy (especially in the proportions area) and I really love the way the bear is drawn.

My guess from sing this is that her head and shoulders really flowed along with most of the bear. Then it looks like something along the lines of the rest of her pose wasn't working for you and neither was the nose on the bear. If you do continue on this one, I would suggest putting in your normal smooth, clean lines in place of the areas where it looks like you second guessed every stroke you took and drew with trepidation and hesitation.