Very interesting concept of the tunnel I must say. Awesome work and happy to see it published by you^•^

Thank you so much, glad you liked it!

Talk about a cliffhanger. Got me on the edge of my seat! Very professionally done, I absolutely loved the letter style of writing, it makes for easy use of the prompt. Awesome!

Thank you! Letter format came to me a bit too quick since I've been writing those for school assignments perhaps a bit too often hehe (I don't even remember there being any other genre XD).

Wooow, how nice to see something written by you! ^^ And interesting journal! I wonder what is in the Site-77. Maybe it's like Area 51 with some aliens or something, haha. It sparks my imagination definitely. :p

Yeah, pretty much what I've thought it out to be, hehe. Thanks a lot Blaze!

Sounds like quite the interesting assignment, I'd be interested in reading more, for sure.

Thank you for reading! I enjoyed writing it.

Oooofffff, nicely done, though why such a short time-limit on getting through the tunnel? Also you may like the game Quantum Break which is a very similar time-travel mechanic, disturbing game though, but then time-travel in general is freaky.

Funnily, I've already played that game, though not all of its many choice routes (I've only finished the story once) Where did you think I got the idea from? Wiliam Joyce helped me out on this one, hehe.
The way I imagined it, the longer you stay in the tunnel the further time will rewind, so staying there for too long may get you to a time you do not aim to go.
I really like time traveling I have to say, brings in a lot of possibilities to play with stuff.
Thank you for reading and the comment.

Ah I see, and yes that makes sense! I actually watched the movie-of-the-game on youtube rather than playing it. And y/w!

No problem!

ooooo such a good beginning to something much bigger...

Vix

Thank you!

Great little start here. The 35 seconds just sounds like it's begging to get screwed up. It actually sounds like the exciting start to a video game to be completely honest.

Yeah, I kind of felt the same way when I was writing it. Thanks for reading.