
Fail.
Sorta?
But I decided to post it anyway - Hah!
Sorta?
But I decided to post it anyway - Hah!
Category Artwork (Digital) / Muscle
Species Wolf
Size 788 x 868px
File Size 252.4 kB
Ahh ok, I though that you´re talking about proportions or anatomy subjects but it was just that. Well, as I see, there´s people who sometimes can´t find what they´re seeking, but there´s others who find something that they´re not looking for, and that´s what I see here then ^ ^
Hot werewolves are NEVER a fail, sir.
I have a friend who'd be interested in trying to colour it, if that's cool with you -- his user name is
zephyrkawabata
I have a friend who'd be interested in trying to colour it, if that's cool with you -- his user name is

Here you go: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5567921/
Keep in mind that it's fairly low-res, though, since it was just a rough digital sketch.
Keep in mind that it's fairly low-res, though, since it was just a rough digital sketch.
Actually the linework is good and with a cool style, you've improved a lot in anatomy especially on the chest. The head is a bit big but that's really not a problem, but the legs are wrong and don't work at all (if you cover them with an hand the drawing is perfect). The right leg is way longer than the left one, but the biggest problem is that the pose is uncomfortable, you just can't bend the leg that much (plus you're covering something nice there... ok that's my pervy side talking :P).
What i would suggest: doing quick sketches of full poses (like trying 30 seconds poses on posemaniacs.com or building a personal equivalent with photo slideshows), and relearning proportions from scratch. By relearning i don't mean just opening a manual, finding the 8-heads man and restudying that, but actually look at bodies, find the landmarks you actually rely on when drawing and learn a personal scheme that's good for you. For example, i start from the upper torso, generally i build the lower torso by doubling the length and i measure the thigh to the knee as the distance from the lower point of the pelvis to the lower point in the pectoral. This could be a stupid complex scheme for another artist, but it's build on what i can easily eyeball, and i reached that by restarting building figures from scratch several times over.
What i would suggest: doing quick sketches of full poses (like trying 30 seconds poses on posemaniacs.com or building a personal equivalent with photo slideshows), and relearning proportions from scratch. By relearning i don't mean just opening a manual, finding the 8-heads man and restudying that, but actually look at bodies, find the landmarks you actually rely on when drawing and learn a personal scheme that's good for you. For example, i start from the upper torso, generally i build the lower torso by doubling the length and i measure the thigh to the knee as the distance from the lower point of the pelvis to the lower point in the pectoral. This could be a stupid complex scheme for another artist, but it's build on what i can easily eyeball, and i reached that by restarting building figures from scratch several times over.
You're right on about the legs. I didn't really plan or reference the pose at all. Not even sure what I was going for - Jumping? Standing? For all I know he's floating around in some endless void. I was kinda more focused on the composition and flow of the pose, not how practical or realistic it is.
Anyhow, some of the other things you mentioned are debatable ( i.e. do you really think the head is too big? - maybe it's just all the poofy fur, that makes it look bigger... ? ) but what it boils down to, is that I just need to do sketches like this more frequently. Which I'm trying to do now...
By the way, his man-bits were intentionally covered up. But if it bothers you, I'll draw a nicely endowed perv werewolf next time. WITH RAEP ON HIS MIND - JUST FOR YOU. >:U
Anyhow, some of the other things you mentioned are debatable ( i.e. do you really think the head is too big? - maybe it's just all the poofy fur, that makes it look bigger... ? ) but what it boils down to, is that I just need to do sketches like this more frequently. Which I'm trying to do now...
By the way, his man-bits were intentionally covered up. But if it bothers you, I'll draw a nicely endowed perv werewolf next time. WITH RAEP ON HIS MIND - JUST FOR YOU. >:U
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