
So this story that is meant to be accompanying a separate art piece that was a part of a massive group commission thing that was organised by my friend Terenus and was done by the awesome tlzn01! You can check the submitted cropped version of the art piece here on my FA here (https://www.furaffinity.net/view/55513566/) or go directly to tlzn's uncropped post of it right here (https://twitter.com/tlzn01/status/1.....67900343373824)! Highly suggest ya all do, give them the support cause they deserve it. ^^w^^
So for the actual story itself in this post, well, originally this was going his started as something small as usual, just the usual short fun description as I always do with most art pieces of work I upload, but it uh...Kind of got out of hand, and as a result, I ended up writing my first full short story in like...8 or 9 so years... ..w..;;;
To explain it kind of just started small, then it grew, and then I was just kind of going on until it became something more bigger. So the whole thing changed into something else and well, I took it as a chance to do my first ever public story, and my first story I've written in general in some time! It is something I do feel I could've done better with, but I legit am proud to have still done it, and this art piece felt like an appropriate one to do it with!
It took some time to complete due to the fact I was proofreading for a while, and various issues came up in the last few weeks, including a back pain that still has been somewhat persisting to bugga me as of late. xX_Xx;;;
It's not a perfect story, I feel I made Leo a tad "Gary-Stu" in his presentation, but I wanted to start from somewhere for my first public story, so why not take some temptation to make Leo a little bit OP. ::P
But in all seriousness, I do wanna make more stories, and hopefully make them more compelling and interesting for all of your enjoyment!
Feel free to share your thoughts, critique, advice, etc. All will be appreciated in the end as I always aim to improve. ::3
So for the actual story itself in this post, well, originally this was going his started as something small as usual, just the usual short fun description as I always do with most art pieces of work I upload, but it uh...Kind of got out of hand, and as a result, I ended up writing my first full short story in like...8 or 9 so years... ..w..;;;
To explain it kind of just started small, then it grew, and then I was just kind of going on until it became something more bigger. So the whole thing changed into something else and well, I took it as a chance to do my first ever public story, and my first story I've written in general in some time! It is something I do feel I could've done better with, but I legit am proud to have still done it, and this art piece felt like an appropriate one to do it with!
It took some time to complete due to the fact I was proofreading for a while, and various issues came up in the last few weeks, including a back pain that still has been somewhat persisting to bugga me as of late. xX_Xx;;;
It's not a perfect story, I feel I made Leo a tad "Gary-Stu" in his presentation, but I wanted to start from somewhere for my first public story, so why not take some temptation to make Leo a little bit OP. ::P
But in all seriousness, I do wanna make more stories, and hopefully make them more compelling and interesting for all of your enjoyment!
Feel free to share your thoughts, critique, advice, etc. All will be appreciated in the end as I always aim to improve. ::3
Category Story / Miscellaneous
Species Arachnid
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 31.5 kB
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