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Another little experiment with POV I firstly try several months ago, now rewritten into what you can see on your screens^•^
Category Poetry / All
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Size 120 x 117px
File Size 1.9 kB
A very gripping tale. The idea that you have to kill your own brother even after warning and not wanting to is a heartbreaking idea. But perfectly encompassed in this poem.
Along with the methodology of your poetic displays, you created a truly incredible scene. The reminiscence of the past mixed with what is happening currently almost carried an elegy feel, but the classic rhyme scheme you used made it slightly different in sort of a Balliol rhyme with a perspective poetry. I love POV stuff as well. Overall, another brilliant piece!
Along with the methodology of your poetic displays, you created a truly incredible scene. The reminiscence of the past mixed with what is happening currently almost carried an elegy feel, but the classic rhyme scheme you used made it slightly different in sort of a Balliol rhyme with a perspective poetry. I love POV stuff as well. Overall, another brilliant piece!
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