First thing, the word oblivious made me laugh XD, proper word is obvious.

its a good piece for having been drawn freehand (or you have a DAMN good eraser) but it needs a bit of work! Good Job


*warning, bluntness ahead*
The arms look like their both broken in different directions and the tail look like it was put through a steam press.

Id suggest using base shapes (triangles and such) before drawing freehand, it would also be a good idea to "use and abuse the ruler" as is for most artist, even experienced ones.

no harm intended, and spell-check is not your grammars friend
*bluntness ends here*

awesome! and thank you for the suggestions! ^^

i have a better version now