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Hey guys, so this is a donkey/raven.
It serves a purpose.
I must draw it.
I CAN'T IT'S TOO HARD!
However, I MUST DRAW IT!
So yea, critique, redline and be harsh as you want.
I may add wings... I may not considering the character doens't have any in anthro form.
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You can still critique this however I inked the final version of my sketch.
Though critique is always helpful for future learning.
It serves a purpose.
I must draw it.
I CAN'T IT'S TOO HARD!
However, I MUST DRAW IT!
So yea, critique, redline and be harsh as you want.
I may add wings... I may not considering the character doens't have any in anthro form.
EEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTT
You can still critique this however I inked the final version of my sketch.
Though critique is always helpful for future learning.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 900 x 766px
File Size 175.7 kB
I'm thinking a deeper chest.
Also, if you're going to add wings make sure to put them at the center of gravity. Most people put them on the shoulder blades for some reason. Considering this guy doesn't have a big tail, I'm thinking that would be about midway on his back.
Hippogryphs are so killer <3
Also, if you're going to add wings make sure to put them at the center of gravity. Most people put them on the shoulder blades for some reason. Considering this guy doesn't have a big tail, I'm thinking that would be about midway on his back.
Hippogryphs are so killer <3
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super fast redlines whee! My printer also pooped ink all over the page. :( I agree on the deeper chest comment. Other things I did: moved the eye back from the beak a wee bit, made the front legs a bit more floofy and full, longer toes!, repositioned the legs mostly because the one closer to the viewer seemed too much forward/unbalanced. I personally like drawing the back legs "staggered," but I also drew them next to each other if you rather do that. And now that I look at it again, the body overall could be a smidge longer. Hope that helps!
super fast redlines whee! My printer also pooped ink all over the page. :( I agree on the deeper chest comment. Other things I did: moved the eye back from the beak a wee bit, made the front legs a bit more floofy and full, longer toes!, repositioned the legs mostly because the one closer to the viewer seemed too much forward/unbalanced. I personally like drawing the back legs "staggered," but I also drew them next to each other if you rather do that. And now that I look at it again, the body overall could be a smidge longer. Hope that helps!
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