Oh yeah some very heavy stuff there. Well done.

Thank you!

Yeah, I made it through once. That second editing pass I had to tap out on this one, lol

Wow. Family relationships can be tough. Well done.

Thank you! This one was painful to edit, lol

I don't usually say this, but this is quite wholesome.

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wonderfully done... it grabbed me, and shook me, and I understood...

Vix

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Very nice story! I liked this deep remembrance of family's past and such. And it was a good thought with how these siblings didn't talk to each other and blamed always something else for it. I think people tend to do that overall, lol. I hate that myself and I just prefer to say why I don't want to talk to someone if I don't want to.

I like your style overall that focuses on family, emotions and dealing with them. Always interesting to read. ^^

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I'm glad to see it was a successful story. I was afraid I got a little heavy-handed with the symbolism I was using in the story, but glad to see the strength of the emotion came through.

You weren't kidding when you said this one was heavy; quite the emotional gut-punch with a wonderful conclusion.

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Guess I was working something out, heh. But it seemed to work out well.