Very interesting...
I kinda like the overall shape

Is it not good enough? I can redo it if you don't like it.

Well i love the design and colors. Though you used a preset gradient somewhat badly.
I dont hate them at all, but intstead of making the metal look awkward with te wavy colors, solid colors are more then acceptable^^
Or if you have the time, why not make your own gradient fill to use? It will likely look better.

Just helpful critique.

I did use my own. With adobe illustrator they have their own preset gradients but I just added more gradient layers and it turned out like that.. Sorry if it didn't meet your standards dude

Oh its fine^^
As i said, i love the design and colors.
I would give it 7/10. Unique design, aesthetically appealing.
Its only marked down because the somewhat odd feeling gradients, and the interestingly off square bit on the blade at the bottom. It looks almost like a hook of sorts, but in the use of a rapier...if you get that close to a opponent, your already done for.

I like it overall, and it was free, so its not like i was expecting the next godsend weapon art XD, i was mostly wondering what sort of idea you would come up with^^.

that makes me feel better now :)

Gotta say, i looked at the rest of them. I love how your mind works. some of those designs is awesome

Thank you. :) I try my best to create interesting weapons. But now a new series of them will come out. A second form of your weapons to be exact

o.o
interesting

Yup. And the people who requested ancient weaponry from me gets them for free. The form that the weapon itself fuses to the wielders arm, and the same metalic substance covers their arm. Each weapon corispones with the wielders main emotion

interesting... So your making a weapon to fuse with a person. I have seen many ways of doing that, gotta say i enjoy the one that look like they infect you when they fuse

Thats how I was going to do it. My characters weapon fuses with him due to his negative emotions, his hatred, rage and etc

MArius's magic is unstable at the best of times, since its not actually his own.
^^ this could be interesting^^
have fun

Originally, your weapon changes do you your strict discipline, and becomes the rapier that pierces any substance.

Interesting idea, the piercer bit and all.
I will say right now he uses two short blades Called the Phantom Dance. Lets him go incorporeal for a few seconds on demand. It requires great concentration and skill to use them in battle