Written in the style of a first chapter. A bit more polished than my last story (hopefully). A jumping off point for a few characters and a potentially longer story, but mainly intended as an attempt to make a furry origin story work - despite multiple admonitions.
Had a terrible time with the name of the virus, so it may change in later editions of this universe.
Very happy with Ted and Katherine. Initially side characters, I think they got some good personality and kind of took off on their own a bit while I was paying attention to Snick and Jenifer. I've heard about characters getting a life of their own like that, but I don't know if I've given any enough freedom to do so before.
Criticism and advice always welcome.
Had a terrible time with the name of the virus, so it may change in later editions of this universe.
Very happy with Ted and Katherine. Initially side characters, I think they got some good personality and kind of took off on their own a bit while I was paying attention to Snick and Jenifer. I've heard about characters getting a life of their own like that, but I don't know if I've given any enough freedom to do so before.
Criticism and advice always welcome.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 13.9 kB
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