I feel proud of myself being able to do this. To think this all started with a doodle and a friend who thought i was drawing raichu

ok, now for the serious part
-opens the flood gates-
Please, critique the hell out of this, cuz this is my first good drawing i've been able to do, so i want to learn, and if you guys to point out things that i dont see (like my hand writing :P) it will help alot

Please dont kill me becasue i used line paper, my sketch book is AWAL at the moment...

Food for thought. If this raichu uses an electric attack, then follows with an iron tail, what would happen. (notice the piercings.[and remember, this is pokemon physics were using])