[Pokémon/Babyfur] "Red Hot Rumps" Informercial
Haven't made a type specific diaper commercial in a hot minute, pun intended. There's quite a few of said commercials I started writing earlier in the year, but couldn't finish due to school, so the first order of business is to catch up on those. Enjoy!
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Pokemon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 7 kB
Oh, wow! You've only gotten better in your commercial-like stories. Your word usage is, as always, nothing short of amazing. The visuals that come with this story are nothing short of being "Red Hot" themselves. Each sentence creates for a full and vibrant environment you can 'feel', 'see', and 'hear'.
*Applauds* Bravo! There's not much more I can say beyond how you just keep getting better with immersing the reader in your works. :)
*Applauds* Bravo! There's not much more I can say beyond how you just keep getting better with immersing the reader in your works. :)
Another wonderful diaper informercial, I like the description you put in for the product and how the Vulpix is like during the whole commercial.
The environment itself in this short story is also nicely detailed as well, along with the description of how the diaper is like in physical appearance.
The environment itself in this short story is also nicely detailed as well, along with the description of how the diaper is like in physical appearance.
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