*giggles*Now HE looks like he could be King of the Pirates! *laughs and punches Luffe* Anyway, wow first time? It does look indeed very nice. I say you did well on it. I will admit. The woman does have an depth to her boobs really... if feels a bit flat to me *laughs some*. She may have small boobs but... I don't mean to offend but it kind of looks like she has an ass on her chest! *murrs sadly and covers his head* Don't hit me! what do I know! Everything else looks good!

I see what you're saying.

I'll consider that in my next venture! <3

*stops ducking his head* I think you need to do a little bit more shadowing there and it SHOULD be fine, but I wouldn't know for certain. I'm no artist. I'm just a writer, but I suppose my eye can still see it *shrugs some*. Still an awesome job and I hope you do well on the next one.... *laughs some* :3 I'm gonna be King of killing repeated, annoying catches phrases!

***blah, she DOESN'T have any depth to here boobs...