
When You Break Free Chapter Eight
When You Break Free
A story by madneko23
Okay so I have been working on the next chapter for awhile now. I decided to break off this part of it as a small update. As always please tell me what you think. I really enjoy these characters and am always eager to get feedback on if I am doing them justice.
A story by madneko23
Okay so I have been working on the next chapter for awhile now. I decided to break off this part of it as a small update. As always please tell me what you think. I really enjoy these characters and am always eager to get feedback on if I am doing them justice.
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Feline (Other)
Size 120 x 99px
File Size 38.5 kB
OMG I have just been waiting for an update on this story! I love it so much! I especially love how we get to explore both Kevin and Sasha's perspectives and dealing with the similar yet different fallouts for their transformations! In addition to May's perspective, because OMG I love her so much!
I personally am curious to see if Sasha's bathroom situation is just stress related or possibly something she might have to adjust to. Especially since her "baby" (don't wanna say that too loudly, lest the little guy hear it and get mad) brother will be, is also taking a bit of a step back in that regards as well. It could make for an interesting dichotomy, Sasha, regressed but in her pre-teens going back potty-training-wise, and Kevin (sooner rather than later, more or less), potentially surpassing her there.
Just a fun thought I had, but I got no idear where this rollercoaster of a story is going, but I am totally excited to see!
I personally am curious to see if Sasha's bathroom situation is just stress related or possibly something she might have to adjust to. Especially since her "baby" (don't wanna say that too loudly, lest the little guy hear it and get mad) brother will be, is also taking a bit of a step back in that regards as well. It could make for an interesting dichotomy, Sasha, regressed but in her pre-teens going back potty-training-wise, and Kevin (sooner rather than later, more or less), potentially surpassing her there.
Just a fun thought I had, but I got no idear where this rollercoaster of a story is going, but I am totally excited to see!
I'm so happy that the story continues to be fun and the switch between the different characters is working. As things "settle" both Sasha and Kevin will have some things to deal with. Next chapter during Sasha's trip to the mall current "Solutions" may not work as well as she hopes.
I can finally put into words what makes your stories feel different from a lot of the other stories here. Namely, they feel complete. The characters personalities are well fleshed out and ooze out in-between the lines. Additionally, the scene is well-set, allowing me to visualize it. I can see the scene and I can understand why the characters think what they do. It seems like an obvious thing, but having read a lot of amateur writing and dabbling in it myself, it's really not. It's something that takes real skill.
Genuinely, your stories feel like a professional manuscript that are a few drafts deeps.
Genuinely, your stories feel like a professional manuscript that are a few drafts deeps.
As always thank you so much for your kind and inspiring words. I put a lot of thought into my characters and really try to make sure they have a distinct emotional pull. So I'm really glad that they come across.
So thank you and I can't wait to get back at the next chapter.
So thank you and I can't wait to get back at the next chapter.
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