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Part 5 to this little mini-series thing, I guess? It definitely seems like people are enjoying it, I don't think I've had a story get this many views in a long time. Might have one more thing after this, setting up more setting and plot stuff, but I'm not sure if I want to commit to anything longer. I am really thankful to everyone's faves and comments, they're actually really helpful and provide me with motivation to actually create more. It definitely still feels weird to be writing and uploading stuff that makes me think of what I created as a teenager, but here we are! Glad to know that there are people out there who still like/want stuff like this.
So, thanks for your readership and everything else that goes with it! :D
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Wulf is presented to the public in a highly publicized and contentious performance which ends on an unusual and sour note. Inspector Sean Peaks meets with Wulf for the first time after Bonn and Hess discuss Wulf's future.
Part 5 to this little mini-series thing, I guess? It definitely seems like people are enjoying it, I don't think I've had a story get this many views in a long time. Might have one more thing after this, setting up more setting and plot stuff, but I'm not sure if I want to commit to anything longer. I am really thankful to everyone's faves and comments, they're actually really helpful and provide me with motivation to actually create more. It definitely still feels weird to be writing and uploading stuff that makes me think of what I created as a teenager, but here we are! Glad to know that there are people out there who still like/want stuff like this.
So, thanks for your readership and everything else that goes with it! :D
Synopsis
Wulf is presented to the public in a highly publicized and contentious performance which ends on an unusual and sour note. Inspector Sean Peaks meets with Wulf for the first time after Bonn and Hess discuss Wulf's future.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Robot / Android / Cyborg
Size 120 x 117px
File Size 579.2 kB
This mini-series has been pretty fun to read. I'm somewhat sad you're unsure about making it longer, but you do what you want. I just felt that this has plenty of potential.
Your third-person prose writing is well done. My most significant criticism is when you swap between first and last names when referring to your characters. I know that it's to prevent it from feeling bland. At the same time, it could risk getting your readers confused, especially when it's done in third-person omniscient.
The characters are fun to read about, though Wulf is the best one. It feels nice to see his character development, where he is growing beyond his blank slate and becoming (for lack of a better term) more human. It does make me curious to see how he develops under Sean's tutelage, though I wonder if Hess ever considered how Wulf would learn under someone with a crusty personality. XD
I'm glad you wrote more of this series. Regardless of how you wish to proceed, always know that I consider it fun to read. <3
Your third-person prose writing is well done. My most significant criticism is when you swap between first and last names when referring to your characters. I know that it's to prevent it from feeling bland. At the same time, it could risk getting your readers confused, especially when it's done in third-person omniscient.
The characters are fun to read about, though Wulf is the best one. It feels nice to see his character development, where he is growing beyond his blank slate and becoming (for lack of a better term) more human. It does make me curious to see how he develops under Sean's tutelage, though I wonder if Hess ever considered how Wulf would learn under someone with a crusty personality. XD
I'm glad you wrote more of this series. Regardless of how you wish to proceed, always know that I consider it fun to read. <3
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