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The Thursday Prompt 16.05.2024. Word: rescue
Well... Something like that hah... Far from being a good submission, but still something xP
Well... Something like that hah... Far from being a good submission, but still something xP
Category Poetry / All
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Size 112 x 120px
File Size 2.2 kB
I shall not lie,
Comrade of mine,
This witchy poem,
‘Twas indeed divine!
I liked the fresh take on a centuries-old tale Having her be thwarted and the kids saved was a nice change of pace from how most Baba Yaga stories end. I was also impressed with your ability to maintain the rhyme scheme despite some frightfully difficult words thrown in there One could say your work was … spellbinding.
Comrade of mine,
This witchy poem,
‘Twas indeed divine!
I liked the fresh take on a centuries-old tale Having her be thwarted and the kids saved was a nice change of pace from how most Baba Yaga stories end. I was also impressed with your ability to maintain the rhyme scheme despite some frightfully difficult words thrown in there One could say your work was … spellbinding.
Pretty good. Justice done and some poor souls rescued.
Bonus music: https://youtu.be/xMdwIP9vRWs?si=e9GY0JDzIMmQmVer
Bonus music: https://youtu.be/xMdwIP9vRWs?si=e9GY0JDzIMmQmVer
Millions thanks Roidh!!
And nice songs music hehe!
I think I can offer you that too:
https://youtu.be/JI1-bnevowA?si=7gnsDP9OjOXxmJMt
And nice songs music hehe!
I think I can offer you that too:
https://youtu.be/JI1-bnevowA?si=7gnsDP9OjOXxmJMt
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