I loved this story when it first popped up on Jade Fox's site, and it's still just as awesome now. I really hope you plan on doing more writing!

(And now for the most belated reply EVER...)

Thank you! Jade was kind enough to help get this whole ball rolling for me so long ago (it feels as such).

The final piece of the trilogy will be posted very soon, so thanks for encouraging me to write more ^_^

I'm surprised you haven't gone through sofawolf or rabbit valley to get that published as a short story yet.

Thanks to your encouragement, I am planning on publishing the trilogy as one 'book' once the third part has been posted! ^_^

im glad to hear that. cant wait to get one.

This is like my favorite story ever, I constantly read it over and over.

and by that I mean on Jade Fox's site, i contantly read it over and over.

Thank you for the fave! I'm glad you enjoy it!

hehe ^^ no prob, I have requested many of my friends to read it too :3

Thank you very much! The word-of-mouth is greatly appreciated.

No prob ^^

I love the story you wrote! she is wonderful

Thank you very much!

That was an absolutely amazing story, a very good read. Thanks for sharing.

My pleasure! Thank you for reading!

I loved this story I thought it was really good I really don't how explain but this is one of the best stories I have read in ages thank you for making this story

My pleasure! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Dude...this story...this story...It was amazing! I really enjoyed the ending and what Cody got to experience. I would honestly be happy if this ever happened to me, even if my life isn't in shambles right now. Perhaps it's just the inner furre in me that is blocking out what the human side does or doesn't want.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading!

I remember reading this long ago, and its still as amazing as it was thr first time I read it

Thank you! I'm glad it has 'staying power'. :D

It's very well written and an interesting story so far (I say that because I only just started it because my time is limited at the moment)

Worry not. It's not going anywhere! ^^

The story is just awesome

Much appreciated! ^_^

Onecho,

I want to start by apologizing to you for not having heard of you until only a week or so ago. My buddy Shrike Fox mentioned this story as being "The Babyfur Story that ALL others are Compared Against" and with a boast like that I had to read it. You see I fancy myself a bit of a Babyfur writer myself and if my attempts are being compared to this lone story I figured I ought to know what I'm up against.

After having read your offering, I have to admit I can't get Cody out of my head, and the similarities between his Rusty and my own Wiley are uncanny. :) I can't tell you how many "unhappy, orphan human transplanted into a cub's body in alternate an reality" stories I've had the pleasure to read; but I can say that I found your approach refreshing.

The inner conflict between souls, the growth of the main character, the inner journey, friends and family, were all quite believable and I was able to suspend reality quite easily as I read it. Initially I was put off by the sudden jumps forward in time, but as I continued reading it presented an opportunity to move the story along without slogging through the day by day routine.

While the ending was transparent, though I was intrigued enough to entertain the main character choosing the other path, the way it was presented was adeptly written and emotionally charged. Yes, I had to wipe away a tear or two. The epilogue was a nice touch. I tend to leave my stories open ended to allow the reader to envision their own future for the main character; but I may consider an Epilogue such as what you did as an option to stories which warrant it.

So, in the end, an excellent story, one I may even read again should time allow. I can see why it is so well regarded. I understand you have recently finished up a sequel and I look forward with anticipation to reading that as well.

Thank you for sharing a little of yourself and your imagination through your talented writing.

Swift Fox

Thank you for giving this such a thorough read-through. I am glad the character developments and such moved you.

Yes, the ending was a bit transparent, something I feel was improved upon in 'Red Sentience' and, even more so, in the third installment, which I will be posting within a few weeks. And Rusty still has a role in this part as well ^_^

Thanks again for you very thoughtful and kind words!

A wonderful story that I can see myself re-reading many times. The ending was beautiful.

Thank you :) Your words are much appreciated!

this is the best and longest babyfur story i have ever read, and cody really cute too *hugs*

Thank you! ^_^ and I think he's pretty cute too ;)

I loved this story. I haven't finished it yet. However, it was well thought out and well written.

Thanks! Glad you enjoy it! :D

You're welcome! One of these days I'll get around to finishing it.

whisper

Are you talkin' 'bout a revolution? You know, since it sounds like a whisper?

Awwww, I'm just now reading this, but its very cute and well written! ^^

Thank you very much! :) I'm glad you're enjoying it! ^_^

Just finished it. You have some serious talent!! It made me cry in a lot of spots. Such a beautiful story. I am grateful to have read it *hugs*
Awesome Job! ^^

Thank you for your very kind words! I'm grateful to you for reading it! ^_^ *hugs*

While I think the sequel, 'Red Sentience' is better written, it will definitely make you cry more.

I will definitely read it!! ^^ hehe

I like the cute name you gave the paws and tails and what-not. *still reading not too far in yet*

All done, Amazing story writing bro. Awesome vocabulary perfect everything as far as I'm concerned.This story was right up there with any of the best stories (diaper related) That I have had the pleasure of reading to date. I have what I think is an odd ability to put myself in the shoes of the characers of the story I'm readingAlmost like living it throught their eyes(XD I'm weird I know) Your story allowed for this almost seamlessly. Idon't wanna appear long-winded so I'll end it with this: Awesome story, very well executed, and very cute characters. I will be continuing on to read the next installments.

I'm so glad you were able to connect with the characters. I completely see where you're coming from, as I'm the same way. ^_^

Wow how do i sum this up in only a few words. Your story has show how good babyfur stories can get. The way you wrote this story has given a new prespective on the way the stories can be told. I honestly can't stop reading it and i will most likey feel the same way about your sequels red sentience and white starlight when i read them. Ths story filled me with an emotion up until now i have not displayed while reading a story of this type. Joy absolute joy you are a very talented writer and quite possibly author of babyfur stories i have encounter to date. Bravo you deserve all the priase you get onecho "claps"

Well, thank you very much Aleksander! Your words mean a lot to me! I hope the next two stories help to further your emotional journey!

I'm not a babyfur or anything of the sort, but my friend is, so consider me an ally i guess :) i very much enjoyed reading blue glow, maybe i'll read the other 2. You did a very fine job on it!

SO YOU are the author of this story!!! I was very impressed with this, this had every element and was incredibly sweet. I constantly reread this one, you did an amazing job!

If you continue writing, I look forward to reading with whatever you come up with! This is one of the best cub stories I have read in my life if not at the very top.

This is a great trilogy. I hope where ever you went you continue to pursue writing.

I LOVED THIS STORY! LOVED IT!!!!!

I'm at the moment trying to transfer the word file into an eBook format. Partly because I feel it is easier to read, and partly because I have nothing better to do. I hope your OK with this. I will not be distributing it unless you give permission.

I'm surprised I haven't commented on this before and though you've been told many times, this is one of the best "cub" stories I've ever read. I had first read it on Jade's site a while back. It had a good balance of every emotion and motivation one would read something like this for. Page 46 with Kyle's family portrait made me cry and really tied not only the story, but my own feelings and cub-self together. This is a long story and you clearly put so much effort into it! I know these parts of our lives aren't always our proudest but you should know you are an amazing writer, and I look forward to reading the next two.

I'm super late on this but I just have to say that this is an amazing stories and I've read the others you posted to follow up. You might not see this but I wanna say that you could be an amazing author or you're probably one now. By the details you used and how the introduction was set, best story I've read. I just wish there was a part 4 😂 anyway, love this story.

cant help but wonder what happened to this guy.. amazing writer.

This was amazing☺

I can't help but think about the "real" Cody. What was his life like in his alternate reality? Does he ever miss his old life and/or feel like his childhood was robbed from him? And on a side note, how would he and all of Cody's friends and family react if they ever found out the truth? That the Cody they new and loved was swapped with Adam? Would the "real" Cody act in rage at the human he felt stole his life? That is, if that's how he feels about his situation? These are all questions that ran through my head when I finished the story.

I Made my own fan comic sequel About Original Cody After reading the trilogy SPOILERS if you didn't read but in the last story Onecho wrote Broken Starlight the Original Cody did come back somehow as a young fox named Edward after completing some 'objective" in the previous world he was sent to and Its up to Adam as Cody to protect him . It isn't explained what's he's done In that world and Edward being little again doesn't remember and its never explained. So the Story basically ends with Cody dyeing and turning into Edwards guardian angel and Codys parents Adopting Edward It goes full circle at the end. In my opinion Edward is the least developed Character in this trilogy So I took the Alot of time out of the summer to make an Unofficial fan comic Dedicated to Edward I imagine him as he grows older becoming an angry spiteful person committing petty graffiti crimes with his friend mainly because all his life he doesn't know were he came from or who he truly is he is also left with ageing step parents since Adam technically stole most of his original life Kind of similar to what happened to Adam in this story but instead Edward is like a more criminal version of Adam. My comic is like 9 pages that's it