Lol I remember this story read it on FF.net

This is a great story. You really made all the structures go well and coherently. I love the way you make the story stick with the story’s context logic and it's also meaningful. In my opinion, I'd like to set this story in the Pokémon world context or at least there some way to transfer them there, because it seems a little bit unnatural for an outlander to suddenly appear from nowhere. Overall, your story is amazing and heart-warming - a desire for a family is such a simple thing, but also the foundation for a further journey in everyone’s life.