I liked the kinks and how they were lead up too, and the kinks (did i mention those). none the less I still thought the ending was anti-climatic. (I also thought lugia should be turned back into a boy once offered, but that's cause I like the gay :3)

Heya dude!
Read randomly this one in the last three days andagain you did a great job. The relationship between your protagonist and his friend from the Dream World is nicely described and some of your aspects you putted into it were pretty cool for me. For example the FurDex. I think it's always very neat to have all kinds of monster refs right when I wanna look for their anatomy or their abilities. Would be definately cool. An other thing I liked is the aspect of Ben's toy as body for the Lugia. I would love it if my fav toy would come alive every fullmoon. That Lugia was pretty small in the beginning appealed very nice to me. You made it a cute relation at that point. It was nice how you build in more characters into the plot. I liked Denise a lot. Her character was a pleasant sympathic one to me. Midna and Strato are two of their own league. It's kinda fun how they suddenly appear and twist things up.
Allover a neat story again and full of nice concepts from your fav game series. (~.=.o)