Hehe. What a fantastic story.

I love the skepticism Jerold has about the game, where you did a wonderful job at giving it the feel of 'Give it a shot. Nothing bad can happen.'

The entire execution of the game played out great, and I love how instead of being a loser by lifting a cup and nothing be under it, you went with the flower. It's really rare when the losing cup actually has something under it, so that was a great touch.

And of course, the entire transformation was perfect. I always love seeing how you describe the pacing and stages a person goes through as they are reduced to a mere object. Having that object be something edible is always a wonderful plus, as I love seeing characters not only lose their identity, but end up vanishing from existence as well. <3

It was also a nice touch with having another random person end up unwittingly being Jerold's executioner, simply because it was a cheat day on her diet. It's nice to see when the person performing the transformation isn't always the one responsible for the victim's ultimate demise.

Thanks again so much for taking this commission and doing such a wonderful job with it.