Zan isn't leader for no reason! Interesting story Haas, and nice to see you enter the prompt ;)

Damn right
Thanks Alex, it was nice to have something to submit for once after so long

Oof, same here. I don't get enough time anymore.

Alas, life be like that some days

Perhaps that whisky could have been of use during her own family dispute. At least Zan got some eventually.

Not a bad idea, though family and drink it a bit like rolling the dice for if it will go well or go wrong.

Zan is likely very thankful to finally get that drink ^^

welcome back HAAS... good story, though some of your punctuation snagged my eyes a bit - missing commas and such. All the same I rather enjoyed it.

Vix

Hello V. and thank you it is good to be back.
Apologise for the rough punctuation I was speeding through this admittedly.
Where are the errors? I'm always happy to fix ^_^

*chuckles... there were more than a few of them HAAS.

When I write, and I rather developed this over the years, I edit as I go. If I write a page, I go back and look at it closely. After a while you develop an editor's eye, and catch the things quicker.

example: “Your silly girl” Zan hissed as she grabbed Temel by the ear “the last thing I need is you getting too big of your ego and causing more trouble than needed”

"You silly girl," Zan hissed as she grabbed Temel by the ear. "The last thing....

*hugs...

Vix

Danke V. ^w^

You are most welcome.

Vix