A nice poem! I like that line: "but your fluffy eartips introduced me to more" haha. It sounds like something I would think when having a moment like that with a furry person.

The end is good too, with how the form it was written in is connected to these emotions and gives them duration in a way.

Thank you thank you! I made it with the thought on how a human would react to a furry person. But I made sure to add a "love on first sight" aspect to it.
Tank u :> the end is actually how I started the story. I had imagined a poem where two people talk to eachother, about eachother. And after I made the ending, all of the start kinda flodded my brain lol. Talk about bass ackwards.

I really like how emotional it is. Your style is very poetic and full of good metaphors. From them, I think these one are my favourite: "my fingertips between a forest of silky darkness"

"like a surgeon, inside my fingers crept. Out your squeal left."

And I think overall that short sentences work here very well at showing the sudden current of thoughts: one feeling falling onto another one in a colourful and buzzling sequence...

"Past, older versions of me would flee from it."

Truly, sometimes it can be even a small, fleeting and seemingly unimportant event which can cause a new version of one's ego to come into existence... Especially when two beings meet

" I messed up some of the punctuations"

Well, who cares? :P After all there have been a lot of artists who were even playing with punctuation on purpose; so it's no sin to make

(By the way I understand perfectly the problem with broken glasses as one of the users of this wonderfully simple device able to sharpen one's demolished sight :))

The metaphors were my favorite part. But I had to make sure I didn't start every sentence with: "Your [blank] was like [blank]." And I think it helped me with making odd sentence structures to type like that.
Glad you picked up on that! Yes, when talking about a lover, I picture there is no coherence in it. It's all a blur of colours and emotions to the two. And they can't help but focus on how every part of the other felt at that moment.

For the punctuations, I agree that it sometimes isn't something to care about. But, to be a good writer, you must be able to do said punctuations with ease. Especially capitalization on the first letter of every sentence. Then, after I'm good enough at base writing then I can get a good handle on styles and playing with punctuations more. Key is to never fall in love with results -w-

Yeah, broken glasses are especially bad when there's a lot of words you gotta look at. Then they kinda mix up and you get typos that some people can't decipher. Buuutttt I found the lense earlier yesterday! So it's all good now :3

"Key is to never fall in love with results -w-"

That's true, I agree that it can be quite of a trap when one is overly satisfied with their own results. To me it rather rarely occurs, as usually my mind is immediatelly critisizing whatever I write. Either extremety is bad, heh.

And I think it's definitely good to return to some of your older writings in order to scrutinize them a bit. If for example one rereads his own work and than finds it requiring some crucial or minor changes, it can indicate an improvement. Though it's much worser if one actually feels that something written years ago by them is actually better than their current style of writing.

Well, since you have pictured with words an encounter between a human and a furry with fur, maybe you should now consider describing a similar one, for example, between a human and a feathered (or scaled) furry as a bit of a comparison..? I can imagine it could differ in a lot of details : )

I like returning to my old stuff. Sometimes I even ask myself "I made that?" But it's more like, I don't think my current works are good. And all my past works feel amazing. Then I come back to the "newer" one a couple months later and find it amazing.

Ohhh~ good idea! Could be a nice addition. Maybe you should try it too, its a nice way to improve your writing a little. There's plenty that could differ, so that might be nice to see.

Well, I envy a bit I have to say. :P. From my side it's usually that I find my old works good, at least in fragments, but whatever I'm writing now I find it somehow insufficient or simply bad. And it does not change with time as I reread them, sadly. As if I've gotten rusty or have lost some kind of flexibility some two or three years ago;

Thanks for proposing to write something similar too. After all people around me were proposing me since a lot of time that I have to focus on smaller and more miscellaneous forms if I want to progress in writing, but honestly my mind has a bad tendency to prolongate everything into horribly long novelettes

Anyway, wish you luck with any future works! : )