The is the pencil art for the 2011 socal furbeque T shirt.

I'm posting this to ask for some opinions before I go to inks.
Theres a few details I am not sure are quite "on"- but are close.

The catch is- I have to go to inks before the party tomorrow, so the window for comments is just today through tomorrow afternoon.
So tell me what you think.
(The ball and net do not count- they're placeholders..Just the characters is what I am asking about.)
The species are otter, fox and cat.
Logos will be placed digitally across the top and bottom.




The art is for the T shirts I sell at the PS party the week before the furbeque to raise cash to buy food, drinks, etc.

The shirts will be $18 each, color, and its to support the annual event.
(I am too poor to be able to shell out money for free eats for people anymore..)
No, you cannot get a color print- you have to buy a shirt.
I'll be at the PS party saturday, (Tomorrow,) to take money and write down sizes and such.
Delivery will be at the party, or at the next party if you pay for one and cannot make the event for some reason.
Yes, I'm pushing the wire.
Yes, all other art duties are on hold till the shirt art is done, because of time constraints, but I can do cartoony like this very quickly.