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Midnight and Snowflake still fear that they're being hunted but they still have to find food to survive. Finding food for them is always a dangerous task though, with the possibility of being caught and, in most cases, beaten. If they're caught by the wrong person though, it could cost them their life.
Category Story / Fantasy
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File Size 103.5 kB
Another enjoyable chapter. On one hand a large group of refugees offers protection on the road, but no doubt the guards and reptilian assassin will be on their case. Hopefully they can make it to the next town safely, but I have my doubts. I like all the little conversations Snowy is privy to. They add a lot of flavor to the world. I especially liked the comments of people speculating why a volcano would explode.
There certainly was a lot of world building in the background. I tried to get as much through as naturally as possible xD Though I have always found that dialogue between other characters can be a great way to expand a world, and to avoid getting too tunnel visioned on the protagonists' characters perspective. Hopefully it doesn't seem like forced exposition though xD
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