
Luck groaned softly as she slowly came to. Sitting up in her bed she yawned and stretched. She stood and rubbed her eyes as she walked forward, eyes closed. She suddenly walked into something solid. Her eyes opened quickly, to behold that there was a solid pane of glass before her. She tapped on the glass before noticing her arm. Her gaze traveled up her arm and over her body. She was wearing an orange jumpsuit. One she could have sworn she's seen before. And on her feet were special looking boots. There was a springlike piece of flexible metal under her raised heel connected to the back of the boot. "What's going on?" she asked to herself confused as she tested the springiness of the boots. "Subject No. 2 please step through the open doorway on your right." came a robotic voice above her. "Surge?" she thought to herself as a door opened on her right. She walked through the door and entered a new room. This room was completely white and the walls were made of panels. She looked around as another door opened. She turned to see Maneki walk into the room next, wearing the same orange jumpsuit and boots. "'Neki?" asked Luck relieved to see the familiar face. "Lucky? What's going on? Where" are we?" asked Maneki as Luck reached her and hugged her tightly. "I don't know. I went to sleep last night in my bed and woke up here, wherever here is." replied Luck seriously. "Subjects No. 1 and No. 2 please pay attention." came a new familiar voice all around them. "Sly?" "Master?" asked the two felines together as they tried to follow the voice futilely. It sounded like Sly but it was monotone, glitchy at times, his voice pitch raising at random intervals. "Rising in the center of the chamber is your new tool. Use them well." said the voice as a cylindrical platform rose through the parting panels in the floor, on which sat two oddly shaped handheld objects. "Suddenly Luck's mind snapped to. "Portal guns." she said almost absently. "You are correct Subject No. 2. These are Aperture Science Dual Handheld Portal Devices for the both of you." replied Sly's voice. "So you intend to put us through tests do you Sly? What if we refuse?" asked Luck seriously. "You can choose to refuse, but I'd advise against it." replied Sly as behind them a wall panel opened, revealing a white machine with an eye. It's eye emitted a targeting laser that focused on Maneki from behind. It's sides opened revealing four holes, and from these holes slithered purple tentacles. "What do you mean you'd advise against it?" asked Luck annoyed before a small voice made her ear twitch. "There you are." came the light voice as Maneki's right boot was grasped by two of the tendrils. Maneki yelped in surprise as she tripped and screamed in fear as she felt herself dragged backwards towards the machine. "A turret!" said Luck quickly, turning and grabbing Maneki's hands, trying to wrench her from the turret's grip. "I cannot force you to complete my puzzles, however I can provide you with incentive to do so. None of my puzzles are deadly, but you may find the consequences for not finishing them quickly a bit...high." said Sly's voice as the other two tendrils began to focus on Luck now. "Luck let go of Maneki to dodge the tentacles quickly. "Lucky!" shouted Maneki frightened. She could feel one of the tendrils snaking it's way up her leg inside her jumpsuit now. "The only way to save her is to..." " I know! I hate you so much." said Luck grabbing a portal device from the cylindrical platform and putting it in her right hand quickly. She dodged another grab from the tentacles and shot a light blue portal onto the wall behind the turret. She cracked a smile as she dove forward, through another grab attempt and placed a purple portal on the ground before her. She flew through into the purple portal and out the light blue portal just behind the turret. She held a sadistic smile as she grasped the wires connecting the panels to the main body and pulled them out quickly. The tentacles connected to the turret released Maneki and flailed before falling to the ground useless, the turret shutting down. "I don't blame you..." said the machine as it shut down. "Come on 'Neki. get up." said Luck hurriedly, pulling Maneki towards the platform for her device. Maneki picked up her device and grasped it in her right hand quickly. Luck pulled herself out of the upper part of her jumpsuit. "If I'm going to do this I may as well be comfortable." she said as hisses could be heard around the room. "Oh good. Now that you're both equipped and ready, we can begin." said Sly as multiple panels moved away from the walls, revealing more turrets behind them. "There you are." "I see you." they all said in unison as their lasers sights focused on the two felines. They all opened, revealing different colored tentacles in each of them. "Your first challenge, shut down all of the turrets in this room." came Sly's glitchy, yet amused voice. "Are you ready 'Neki?" asked Luck seriously. "Yes. I'll follow your lead Lucky." replied Maneki standing back to back with Luck. "Let's do this!" said Luck seriously as the tendrils began to advance on them quickly.
Art by:
shouk
Maneki and Luck were Originally Designed by:
mingchee
Adopted by me.
Portal is Copyright to Valve.
Art by:

Maneki and Luck were Originally Designed by:

Adopted by me.
Portal is Copyright to Valve.
Category All / All
Species Housecat
Size 1104 x 1224px
File Size 708.5 kB
First off let me say that you made my day by commenting on the story. Second, thanks for the fave.. Third I'm glad you liked it.
shana did an excellent job with this.

Read the short story. It is very interesting to see two characters put into this kind of situation. As I read the story I thought about it being myself and one of my friends. Me being Lucky who has played both Portal Games and my friend Gabriel as Neki who has not, even though it is not noted if Neki has ever played Portal. Sly reminds me of someone who likes the challenge of the puzzles and wants to see who can complete them - must play Tetris a lot and is extremely good at it-. I must say I like the little reference in the picture, Neki as Chell from Portal 1 and Lucky as Chell from Portal 2. All and all it is a really good story and awesome set up for the characters.
Thank you very much for commenting. (It really means a lot to me that you took the time to do so.) I am glad to hear that you enjoyed it. And nice catch on noticing the difference between their outfits. As Luck is the gamer of the two, she has beaten both games, while Maneki has not.
For a second there, I was like, "Wait, there's no way Sly would have turrets firing bullets at his Kitten and Kitty" and then--nope, not bullets. Nice redesign on those! (My mind immediately jumps to thinking of higher level turrets using those tentacles to move around like octopi, which is freakin' terrifying!) Also about the turrets, Luck ripped out the wires rather than knocking the turret over to shut it down--would knocking over work for these? It probably wouldn't work for the octurrets later on...
I also note that the cats would have an easier time always landing on their feet, unlike a human. The Long Fall Boots supposedly do something about that, but it's never explained how you instantly reorient to whatever orientation is down when you pass through a portal--it happens in both games. Plus, sometimes you don't want to be right side up coming through a portal--do the "speedy thing in/speedy thing out" headed towards the ceiling, would actually be better to hit feet-first and then reorient again. There are other cases where it would be annoying if the boots have some sort of gyroscope thing in them.
....It can't be gyros, that would make walking basically impossible because your feet wouldn't swing....
It's a game about running around in a facility operated by an insane and murderous AI, wielding a gun that shoots wormholes, surrounded by turrets that either have bottomless reserves of bullets* (or tentacles), and I'm sitting here wondering how the heck those boots keep you from landing on your head. XD
So, once again, good writing, pairs well with the picture, and leaves just one important question--
When they finish the tests, will there be...cake? Or something else?
*Easily accomplished with one portal in the turret and one at the bottom and one at the bottom of a bullet warehouse, which you KNOW Aperture has at LEAST one of. But that's not actually how they show the turrets fitting so many bullets in them...
I also note that the cats would have an easier time always landing on their feet, unlike a human. The Long Fall Boots supposedly do something about that, but it's never explained how you instantly reorient to whatever orientation is down when you pass through a portal--it happens in both games. Plus, sometimes you don't want to be right side up coming through a portal--do the "speedy thing in/speedy thing out" headed towards the ceiling, would actually be better to hit feet-first and then reorient again. There are other cases where it would be annoying if the boots have some sort of gyroscope thing in them.
....It can't be gyros, that would make walking basically impossible because your feet wouldn't swing....
It's a game about running around in a facility operated by an insane and murderous AI, wielding a gun that shoots wormholes, surrounded by turrets that either have bottomless reserves of bullets* (or tentacles), and I'm sitting here wondering how the heck those boots keep you from landing on your head. XD
So, once again, good writing, pairs well with the picture, and leaves just one important question--
When they finish the tests, will there be...cake? Or something else?
*Easily accomplished with one portal in the turret and one at the bottom and one at the bottom of a bullet warehouse, which you KNOW Aperture has at LEAST one of. But that's not actually how they show the turrets fitting so many bullets in them...
Glad you liked it. I had her rip the wires out because it would be more dramatic and dynamic than just having her knock it over.
Yeah there's no explaination on how the Long Fall boots actually work. We just have the commercial where Cave Johnson is promoting them and says he told the test subject to try to land on her head and shows her unable to. "Good job Boots."
We have to rely on the suspencion of disbelief for that. We know they work in the world of Portal because they do, and because we're told that they work in a certain way. (Just like in Back to the Future. We know Time Travel isn't real, but we're told that it's possible in that world because we're told that the "Flux Capacitor is what makes time travel possible." We don't need to know how. Just that in this world, it works.
Of course there will be cake.
Yeah there's no explaination on how the Long Fall boots actually work. We just have the commercial where Cave Johnson is promoting them and says he told the test subject to try to land on her head and shows her unable to. "Good job Boots."
We have to rely on the suspencion of disbelief for that. We know they work in the world of Portal because they do, and because we're told that they work in a certain way. (Just like in Back to the Future. We know Time Travel isn't real, but we're told that it's possible in that world because we're told that the "Flux Capacitor is what makes time travel possible." We don't need to know how. Just that in this world, it works.
Of course there will be cake.
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