This took me forever, i did it during class, lol, it's cool, isn't it?
© ZeldaTheWolf (me)
© ZeldaTheWolf (me)
Category All / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 960 x 720px
File Size 186 kB
I quite like the pose even though it's pretty generic but still cool anyway. I like the little style your developing. You're getting so much better now!
Now I will give some critique.
First the ears.
They need to be a little bit longer. Also they are much too thin and very pointy and sharp looking. Wolves ears look like a very rounded triangle shape. Now I'm talking about grey wolves here. Different wolves have slightly different shapes and lengths on body parts. The reason why I'm talking about grey wolves here is because they are the most popularly used wolf breed and also the one that comes to mind when people hear the word 'wolf'. Also I'm guessing that is the type of wolf that has been drawn here am I right Zelda? Heres some photo references of Grey Wolf ears:
http://www.ngsprints.co.uk/images/M/739835.jpg http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs50/f/2009/326/6/e/wolf_ear_coloring_practice_by_White_Rain_Angel.jpg
Onto the legs and paws. The paws... well... they look like a square. The should be more round, I don't know how to explain it... here's some reference pics:
http://www.howtodrawwolves.com/wp-c.....10/12/tip3.jpg http://www.howtodrawwolves.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/tip4.jpg
http://www.howtodrawwolves.com/wp-c.....0/12/step2.jpg Here's the tutorial these came from: http://www.howtodrawwolves.com/how-.....raw-wolf-paws/
The legs, they looks like little stiff rectangles. The poor thing would be able to move! A wolf's legs just don't look like that. I mean, where's the elbows? The shoulders? Whe- where are they?? Here's some pics too see how a wolf's legs SHOULD look like: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&global=1&q=wolf+leg+tutorial#/d1l7w5x http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&global=1&q=wolf+leg+tutorial#/d15phax http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=wolf%20leg%20tutorial&order=9&offset=24&offset=24#/d35ves9
The tail is a little weird but in one of those it shows how tails look like anyway so I needn't go into into that. :P
The back should be more curved downwards because right now it looks like the wolf has a hunchback or hump instead of a normal back. The stomach should curve upwards once it gets closer to the hind legs unless you want it to be a fat wolf. xD
The neck is to long as well and needs to be shorter.
I'm going to red line this to show the correct anatomy whether you want me to or not.
Sorry if I was a little harsh but that's just my way of trying to get my point across to give a good critique. Sorry.
Now I will give some critique.
First the ears.
They need to be a little bit longer. Also they are much too thin and very pointy and sharp looking. Wolves ears look like a very rounded triangle shape. Now I'm talking about grey wolves here. Different wolves have slightly different shapes and lengths on body parts. The reason why I'm talking about grey wolves here is because they are the most popularly used wolf breed and also the one that comes to mind when people hear the word 'wolf'. Also I'm guessing that is the type of wolf that has been drawn here am I right Zelda? Heres some photo references of Grey Wolf ears:
http://www.ngsprints.co.uk/images/M/739835.jpg http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs50/f/2009/326/6/e/wolf_ear_coloring_practice_by_White_Rain_Angel.jpg
Onto the legs and paws. The paws... well... they look like a square. The should be more round, I don't know how to explain it... here's some reference pics:
http://www.howtodrawwolves.com/wp-c.....10/12/tip3.jpg http://www.howtodrawwolves.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/tip4.jpg
http://www.howtodrawwolves.com/wp-c.....0/12/step2.jpg Here's the tutorial these came from: http://www.howtodrawwolves.com/how-.....raw-wolf-paws/
The legs, they looks like little stiff rectangles. The poor thing would be able to move! A wolf's legs just don't look like that. I mean, where's the elbows? The shoulders? Whe- where are they?? Here's some pics too see how a wolf's legs SHOULD look like: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&global=1&q=wolf+leg+tutorial#/d1l7w5x http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&global=1&q=wolf+leg+tutorial#/d15phax http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=wolf%20leg%20tutorial&order=9&offset=24&offset=24#/d35ves9
The tail is a little weird but in one of those it shows how tails look like anyway so I needn't go into into that. :P
The back should be more curved downwards because right now it looks like the wolf has a hunchback or hump instead of a normal back. The stomach should curve upwards once it gets closer to the hind legs unless you want it to be a fat wolf. xD
The neck is to long as well and needs to be shorter.
I'm going to red line this to show the correct anatomy whether you want me to or not.
Sorry if I was a little harsh but that's just my way of trying to get my point across to give a good critique. Sorry.
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