A Rocky Start (The Arceus Ascension Pt. 1)
A Rocky Start — 8.7k words — 29 pages
I am excited to unveil the first part of my first large story series—the Arceus Ascension!
As you might expect from the title, this series is a long-form Arceus transformation story, but, as I am sure you can see from this story's title and tags—this transformative tale will include an entire independent Pokémon transformation for each type! Each of the 19 plates, and perhaps some that have yet to be discovered, will feature a trial for dear Star to overcome... one cannot become that which embodies every aspect of the world without knowing how to embody each, after all.
This one features group transformation, some hypnosis, and a "corrupted" gal helping further the transformation along for her reluctant friends.
Enjoy this first taste... there will be far more to come~
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I am excited to unveil the first part of my first large story series—the Arceus Ascension!
As you might expect from the title, this series is a long-form Arceus transformation story, but, as I am sure you can see from this story's title and tags—this transformative tale will include an entire independent Pokémon transformation for each type! Each of the 19 plates, and perhaps some that have yet to be discovered, will feature a trial for dear Star to overcome... one cannot become that which embodies every aspect of the world without knowing how to embody each, after all.
This one features group transformation, some hypnosis, and a "corrupted" gal helping further the transformation along for her reluctant friends.
Enjoy this first taste... there will be far more to come~
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Category Story / Transformation
Species Pokemon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 197.3 kB
You have a pretty ambitious project and I like where you're taking it.
Speaking about the chapter in particular, I really liked the fact that it explored the lives of these characters more in depth, especially Star, who is shown to us with one or another problem regarding what she wants to be in the future. I like that in transformation stories they try to give more of a backstory to the characters so that the impact of their change is more intense.
So each chapter will be about different people finding magic stones that will turn them into corrupted Pokémon? I wonder if we'll still see Star in the other chapters, possibly yes. Great work and dedication to make a 29 page story.
Speaking about the chapter in particular, I really liked the fact that it explored the lives of these characters more in depth, especially Star, who is shown to us with one or another problem regarding what she wants to be in the future. I like that in transformation stories they try to give more of a backstory to the characters so that the impact of their change is more intense.
So each chapter will be about different people finding magic stones that will turn them into corrupted Pokémon? I wonder if we'll still see Star in the other chapters, possibly yes. Great work and dedication to make a 29 page story.
Thanks for your comment!
It is a big project indeed, as much of a self-imposed challenge as it is a story idea I want to see to fruition. I have trouble keeping on the same thing for long periods of time, so I figured I'd hedge my bets by making a series that's basically many different TFs with different triggers/settings/creatures in one.
I'm glad you liked Star... they're actually going to be featuring in *every* story, as you will see set up in part 2. You could say they're the star of the show, hehe....
It is a big project indeed, as much of a self-imposed challenge as it is a story idea I want to see to fruition. I have trouble keeping on the same thing for long periods of time, so I figured I'd hedge my bets by making a series that's basically many different TFs with different triggers/settings/creatures in one.
I'm glad you liked Star... they're actually going to be featuring in *every* story, as you will see set up in part 2. You could say they're the star of the show, hehe....
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