This is a long-term commission piece (unpaid for) that has been in the works for far longer then I dare to admit. It was put on hold due to several anatomy issues that were throwing things all wonky. Also her foot kind of went off the page as it were. The original pencils are on illustration board and due to a serious issue of potential eraser burn, I started working on printed-sketch-editing instead.

His wings, his face (supposed to look more like Red13 from the FF series - but a hybrid of the person as well and it didin't work out the way I had wanted it too), her foot, and general background layout issues are causing problems.

Redlines, crits, comments, or otherwise serious suggestion are heartily excepted. This is an important piece for me, and one of the biggest learning projects I've ever tackled. I want the final to be in full color (either arcrylics, or a water color/colored pencil work up) - but haven't made up my mind yet.

The inked final will be a separate piece from the colored one.