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Commentary:
After Margrethe escapes, I worried about that her method might be frustrating to some readers, especially since Mufesu hasn't been properly explained up until now. Now hopefully it's clear that the spell is not as convenient as one might expect, and someone as careful as Margrethe would reasonably have this contingency plan. I also wanted to have some kind of visual aid for panel 3, but I suppose Olaf's explanation will do, as I was stumped as to what I would even add as visual.

This page also makes it clear that Margrethe's disguise is basically foolproof. Aside from the reasons Elek mentioned, it's also unclear to the others what her species even is, as it's vaguely dragon shaped. I felt it was also important to cover the smell aspect, which also hadn't been addressed until now.

And finally, I got to have Rikku chime in (albeit internally) as to how he fells about the situation. That'll be important later this chapter.

Relevant Pages:
8-6 , 8-7 , 19-10 , 19-29 , 20-38