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So, here it is. An ickle bit of supernatural horror I scribbled up during finals week for 
Tybalt_Maxwell's story collection (read it here!).
I've always found myself comfortable with this sort of thing due to growing up with a good amount of Lovecraft and a greater deal of dream weirdness, so this was quite natural for getting back into stride with writing.
Comment and critique away. Your words can only help me better my words in the future, so I welcome them fully. :3
Tybalt_Maxwell's story collection (read it here!).I've always found myself comfortable with this sort of thing due to growing up with a good amount of Lovecraft and a greater deal of dream weirdness, so this was quite natural for getting back into stride with writing.
Comment and critique away. Your words can only help me better my words in the future, so I welcome them fully. :3
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 22.5 kB
It took me this long to finally read it all, I apologize.
Very Lovecraftian, and it actually reminds me of the character Red from Penumbra: Overture. Anyway, I rather enjoyed it, and I'd love to see what could be done about an audio narration of sorts. My only thing is that I feel like there's a disconnect between the beginning and the end. However that disconnect DOES make sense for the type of character the narrator is, a disjointed, disconnected mind.
Also, realizing this now, making literature furry seems to knock it down a tier on my respect-o-meter. Gave me an idea though. What if it was totally ambiguous. Instead of "fur", say "coat". Have it so the reader can either assume furry or non. Just a thought. Probably not a good one.
Either way, I wish you wrote more. Both for your sake, and because you're damn good at it.
Very Lovecraftian, and it actually reminds me of the character Red from Penumbra: Overture. Anyway, I rather enjoyed it, and I'd love to see what could be done about an audio narration of sorts. My only thing is that I feel like there's a disconnect between the beginning and the end. However that disconnect DOES make sense for the type of character the narrator is, a disjointed, disconnected mind.
Also, realizing this now, making literature furry seems to knock it down a tier on my respect-o-meter. Gave me an idea though. What if it was totally ambiguous. Instead of "fur", say "coat". Have it so the reader can either assume furry or non. Just a thought. Probably not a good one.
Either way, I wish you wrote more. Both for your sake, and because you're damn good at it.
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