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Sixteenth Hypnovember commission!
The client was ninetalesuk and he wanted a story with the Spiral prompt. Again, I was tasked with writing a Pokemon history, with some elements that were different from the main games and franchise.
If you are interested in getting a commission, I still have some options left for the month.
https://www.deviantart.com/mindtasker/art/Hypnovember-2024-Commissions-Read-Description-1113301324
Grace was happy.
She couldn’t stop thinking about the conversation she had with her daughter, Serena. The two haven’t seen each other since her 18th birthday and as they took all day to catch up, with the two talking about what they did during that time and what they were planning on doing, the short-haired woman was hooked with what her daughter told her. She met a lot of new friends and even connected with some Gym Leaders, including Korrina. Just thinking about how good her daughter was made Grace happy and while she wanted to continue asking her about more details, it was close to midnight and the short-haired woman decided to go to sleep.
Unbeknownst to her, there was someone else in the house. The young trainer didn’t notice it, but during her trip back to her hometown of Vaniville Town, someone followed her. It was in their plans to take just her and her Glaceon, but upon seeing that Serena was visiting her mother, the sinister figure decided to first take Grace. As the beautiful woman drifted into sleep, smiling and thinking about how happy she was, a colorful and shiny light that was shaped like a spiral came into Grace's room and slowly lowered into her forehead before meringue with her, leaving it a mark in the process.
Suddenly, the short-haired woman started to feel a strange yet nice sensation going around her body, quickly overwhelming her. Even though she was unsure about what was happening, the sensation was too much for her as Grace started to blush and moan. This of course was her drifting into a nice state of trance, letting her senses shut down and starting to see nothing but spirals. The beautiful woman was at ease, loving that blissful sensation and loving every second of it. She was usually someone mentally strong, a woman who rarely went into panic mode, but at that moment, consumed by the entrancing spirals, she was weak and submissive.
“Lovely…spirals…” Grace cooed softly as she blushed hard. Yes, this was all she wanted, not to help her daughter or to go back to being a famous Rhyhorn racer as instead, the short-haired woman accepted her new life as a servant. A couple of minutes later, after her memories were twisted and changed, making Grace believe that not only this was what she always wanted but also what she was born to do, the spiral in her forehead disappeared, she gasped in surprise and…
PING!
The moment she opened her eyes, it was revealed that they were covered with spirals that were moving at a fast pace. Her past self was long gone as the woman that was sitting there with the blank expression was the new Grace, a mindless and loyal servant that was going to obey every command she was told. This was the end of the induction, but not the end of the whole thing as she needed to do more, but as the short-haired woman heard someone knocking the door, she got up and opened. In front of her, was Serena and her Glaceon who were also in the same state as her.
The hypnotic light also guided Serena and her Pokémon into that state of submission as the two had the same spirals and blank expressions in their faces. The three couldn’t help but to be happy to finally see the light and enjoy that wonderful state of bliss. They hoped to finally meet the one that opened their eyes and to their delight, just as they were wondering who it could be, they heard a calm voice telling them to come to her. This was enough to make the beautiful woman and blonde-haired gal to leave the house in the middle of the night, not caring about leaving with clothes that barely covered her body or if someone might see them, the chance of meeting their new owner was all that matters to them.
After a while marching like zombies, with the women machine with their arms up and the hypnotized Pokémon walking closely, Grace and Serena felt closer to their owner as the spiral symbols in their forehead came back. As they arrived at the Santalune Forest, it was the blonde-haired gal who first noticed a glowing figure that was waiting for them and on a closer look, not only did Serena noticed that the woman in question looked like a humanoid robot, with half of her body looking like a normal woman and the other with some robotic parts, but that she also looked like Olympia, the psychic Gym Leader of Anistar City.
“Greetings, dears. I’m so happy to see you…and so does your new mistress,” the psychic woman said in a calm yet seductive tone. Her words revealed something important as even though she was the one that used that hypnotic spell on them, she was just a pawn. All happened a couple of days ago, after she defeated the last trainer of the day. Olympia was looking forward to a night of meditation, interested in going into the deepest point of trance she could, but then, someone went into her meditation room. The one truly behind everything was the legendary Pokémon Xerneas, but it wasn’t the same magical deer that everyone expected.
This Pokémon had a more human-like body, with a seductive figure that included a deep luscious cleavage and wife hips and she also had half of her body robotized. While the encounter with the Gym Leader was short and quick, Xerneas used her abilities to hypnotize Olympia and turn her into a robot just like her. For days, as the two hide in the forest, they discuss the next victims and as the psychic woman mentioned that she had an encounter with Serena a short time ago, and that she was told she was going back to Vaniville Town. She was happy to see that her servant had success with the plan and while she had intentions of rewarding her later, now it was time for the legendary Pokémon to take complete control over Grace, Serena and Glaceon.
“I’m so pleased to meet you. My lovely servant has told me a lot about you, Serena. And Grace, is a nice surprise to see you too. I wasn’t planning on taking you tonight, but I couldn’t let go of the chance of having a pretty servant like you by my side~” The deer gal said while she admired the bodies of her two new servants. Being this close to their new mistress, the one whom they dreamed about felt nice and they were eager to have the opportunity to prove they were worthy of being with her. “I have intentions of taking complete control over Kalos and then…the world, but to do that, I’m going to need loyal servants. I assume you two are interesting in being by my side and obeying all my commands, right?~”
The two women quickly nodded their heads, too overwhelmed to even talk. Their mistress offered the chance of the lifetime and they were not going to turn down something like this. As Xerneas petted the head of the small Pokémon, she looked at her two new servants one last time and as she was pleased with their reactions, she activated her new ability as from her chest armor opened up and fired off twin beams that quickly turned Grace, Serena and Glaceon into the same kind of robots she and Olympia were.
“I hope you two like your new bodies, because your mistress truly enjoys seeing you like that~” Laughing maniacally and feeling triumphant, her three new servants continued to look at their mistress while smiling, glad that they got what they all desired. Of course, she wanted to end the night with a blast and as the legendary Pokémon used the glow of her horns to continue to twist the ideas and memories of her servants, she started to discuss the future plans she had with them and her future victims.
It was simple, first, Xerneas was going for women from the Kalos region, set on getting Korrina and her Lucario, Serena’s friend, Shauna and finally, the Champion of the region, Diantha. Once she had all, the seductive Pokemon was planning on going to other regions, already having some names in mind. Another champion like Cynthia or Iris would be nice, but also getting some powerful trainers like Dawn, Clair, Nessa, Phoebe or even a professor like Aurea Juniper. The possibilities were never ending and the best part was that Xerneas knew that no one was strong enough to stop her. Soon, she was going to take over the world, but first, as she commanded her four servants to move closer, she activated the glow of her horns again and granted them something nice, something she called the “ultimate bonding brainwashing”. For anyone, being in this position looked bad, but for Grace, Serena and Glaceon.
They were living a wonderful fantasy.
The client was ninetalesuk and he wanted a story with the Spiral prompt. Again, I was tasked with writing a Pokemon history, with some elements that were different from the main games and franchise.
If you are interested in getting a commission, I still have some options left for the month.
https://www.deviantart.com/mindtasker/art/Hypnovember-2024-Commissions-Read-Description-1113301324
Xerneas’ ControlGrace was happy.
She couldn’t stop thinking about the conversation she had with her daughter, Serena. The two haven’t seen each other since her 18th birthday and as they took all day to catch up, with the two talking about what they did during that time and what they were planning on doing, the short-haired woman was hooked with what her daughter told her. She met a lot of new friends and even connected with some Gym Leaders, including Korrina. Just thinking about how good her daughter was made Grace happy and while she wanted to continue asking her about more details, it was close to midnight and the short-haired woman decided to go to sleep.
Unbeknownst to her, there was someone else in the house. The young trainer didn’t notice it, but during her trip back to her hometown of Vaniville Town, someone followed her. It was in their plans to take just her and her Glaceon, but upon seeing that Serena was visiting her mother, the sinister figure decided to first take Grace. As the beautiful woman drifted into sleep, smiling and thinking about how happy she was, a colorful and shiny light that was shaped like a spiral came into Grace's room and slowly lowered into her forehead before meringue with her, leaving it a mark in the process.
Suddenly, the short-haired woman started to feel a strange yet nice sensation going around her body, quickly overwhelming her. Even though she was unsure about what was happening, the sensation was too much for her as Grace started to blush and moan. This of course was her drifting into a nice state of trance, letting her senses shut down and starting to see nothing but spirals. The beautiful woman was at ease, loving that blissful sensation and loving every second of it. She was usually someone mentally strong, a woman who rarely went into panic mode, but at that moment, consumed by the entrancing spirals, she was weak and submissive.
“Lovely…spirals…” Grace cooed softly as she blushed hard. Yes, this was all she wanted, not to help her daughter or to go back to being a famous Rhyhorn racer as instead, the short-haired woman accepted her new life as a servant. A couple of minutes later, after her memories were twisted and changed, making Grace believe that not only this was what she always wanted but also what she was born to do, the spiral in her forehead disappeared, she gasped in surprise and…
PING!
The moment she opened her eyes, it was revealed that they were covered with spirals that were moving at a fast pace. Her past self was long gone as the woman that was sitting there with the blank expression was the new Grace, a mindless and loyal servant that was going to obey every command she was told. This was the end of the induction, but not the end of the whole thing as she needed to do more, but as the short-haired woman heard someone knocking the door, she got up and opened. In front of her, was Serena and her Glaceon who were also in the same state as her.
The hypnotic light also guided Serena and her Pokémon into that state of submission as the two had the same spirals and blank expressions in their faces. The three couldn’t help but to be happy to finally see the light and enjoy that wonderful state of bliss. They hoped to finally meet the one that opened their eyes and to their delight, just as they were wondering who it could be, they heard a calm voice telling them to come to her. This was enough to make the beautiful woman and blonde-haired gal to leave the house in the middle of the night, not caring about leaving with clothes that barely covered her body or if someone might see them, the chance of meeting their new owner was all that matters to them.
After a while marching like zombies, with the women machine with their arms up and the hypnotized Pokémon walking closely, Grace and Serena felt closer to their owner as the spiral symbols in their forehead came back. As they arrived at the Santalune Forest, it was the blonde-haired gal who first noticed a glowing figure that was waiting for them and on a closer look, not only did Serena noticed that the woman in question looked like a humanoid robot, with half of her body looking like a normal woman and the other with some robotic parts, but that she also looked like Olympia, the psychic Gym Leader of Anistar City.
“Greetings, dears. I’m so happy to see you…and so does your new mistress,” the psychic woman said in a calm yet seductive tone. Her words revealed something important as even though she was the one that used that hypnotic spell on them, she was just a pawn. All happened a couple of days ago, after she defeated the last trainer of the day. Olympia was looking forward to a night of meditation, interested in going into the deepest point of trance she could, but then, someone went into her meditation room. The one truly behind everything was the legendary Pokémon Xerneas, but it wasn’t the same magical deer that everyone expected.
This Pokémon had a more human-like body, with a seductive figure that included a deep luscious cleavage and wife hips and she also had half of her body robotized. While the encounter with the Gym Leader was short and quick, Xerneas used her abilities to hypnotize Olympia and turn her into a robot just like her. For days, as the two hide in the forest, they discuss the next victims and as the psychic woman mentioned that she had an encounter with Serena a short time ago, and that she was told she was going back to Vaniville Town. She was happy to see that her servant had success with the plan and while she had intentions of rewarding her later, now it was time for the legendary Pokémon to take complete control over Grace, Serena and Glaceon.
“I’m so pleased to meet you. My lovely servant has told me a lot about you, Serena. And Grace, is a nice surprise to see you too. I wasn’t planning on taking you tonight, but I couldn’t let go of the chance of having a pretty servant like you by my side~” The deer gal said while she admired the bodies of her two new servants. Being this close to their new mistress, the one whom they dreamed about felt nice and they were eager to have the opportunity to prove they were worthy of being with her. “I have intentions of taking complete control over Kalos and then…the world, but to do that, I’m going to need loyal servants. I assume you two are interesting in being by my side and obeying all my commands, right?~”
The two women quickly nodded their heads, too overwhelmed to even talk. Their mistress offered the chance of the lifetime and they were not going to turn down something like this. As Xerneas petted the head of the small Pokémon, she looked at her two new servants one last time and as she was pleased with their reactions, she activated her new ability as from her chest armor opened up and fired off twin beams that quickly turned Grace, Serena and Glaceon into the same kind of robots she and Olympia were.
“I hope you two like your new bodies, because your mistress truly enjoys seeing you like that~” Laughing maniacally and feeling triumphant, her three new servants continued to look at their mistress while smiling, glad that they got what they all desired. Of course, she wanted to end the night with a blast and as the legendary Pokémon used the glow of her horns to continue to twist the ideas and memories of her servants, she started to discuss the future plans she had with them and her future victims.
It was simple, first, Xerneas was going for women from the Kalos region, set on getting Korrina and her Lucario, Serena’s friend, Shauna and finally, the Champion of the region, Diantha. Once she had all, the seductive Pokemon was planning on going to other regions, already having some names in mind. Another champion like Cynthia or Iris would be nice, but also getting some powerful trainers like Dawn, Clair, Nessa, Phoebe or even a professor like Aurea Juniper. The possibilities were never ending and the best part was that Xerneas knew that no one was strong enough to stop her. Soon, she was going to take over the world, but first, as she commanded her four servants to move closer, she activated the glow of her horns again and granted them something nice, something she called the “ultimate bonding brainwashing”. For anyone, being in this position looked bad, but for Grace, Serena and Glaceon.
They were living a wonderful fantasy.
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