The train is becoming a nuisance.
If Max wants to keep himself from a second death, he will have to stand and fight. He is not alone though. He has his best friend, his devoted sister, his wise protector, and a new friend whose main expertise is actually *disposing* of zombies.
It will all end in the desert. Flesh will tear, shit will blow up, victory will be tasted. And the Lord of Death's work is not yet finished...
If Max wants to keep himself from a second death, he will have to stand and fight. He is not alone though. He has his best friend, his devoted sister, his wise protector, and a new friend whose main expertise is actually *disposing* of zombies.
It will all end in the desert. Flesh will tear, shit will blow up, victory will be tasted. And the Lord of Death's work is not yet finished...
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 195 kB
Simply impeccable, I never would have guessed the story would take a turn like this, and a turn to so successfully executed at that. I think if you sat down and perfected this (not that much more work needs to be done on it) and maybe cropped out the coarse language, you'd have a very successful children's or young adult fiction book :)
I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
I am waiting for the story to be finished so that I can take it to office max to get printed, as I would love to read the story more at my pace than at what my comp will let me read(I tend to read pretty fast [I can knock out an 800+ page book in less than six hours if I get hooked on the book] not to mention, it would lessen the chances of me getting carpal tunnel from constantly scrolling down)
I should have said, that I can read a 800+ page book in less than six, if the book has me rivited in it. Usually, after I do a mrathon read like that, I will read the book again at a much slower pace just to get more info on it. Plus I also tend to read anywhere from 3-6 books at the same time.
You just love tying information from other places in here dont you. It makes yoru stories oh so much more enjoyable
( it was this this time: 'My name is Tish Lopez. You killed my brother. Prepare to die.'. the actual line is 'Hello. My Name Is Inigo Montoya. You Killed My Father. Prepare to Die'. I thought i was the only one to remember that movie)
( it was this this time: 'My name is Tish Lopez. You killed my brother. Prepare to die.'. the actual line is 'Hello. My Name Is Inigo Montoya. You Killed My Father. Prepare to Die'. I thought i was the only one to remember that movie)
Pope piss was one of those ideas I had that I almost didn't put in because I thught it was too horrifically bizarre. Thankfully, I make it a policy to *always* leave whatever-it-is in after I have that thought. And inevitably, those are the things everyone ends up commenting on. :)
That could work, but I always imagined something with a really pounding, relentless techno beat.
This fella here did a fuckin' amazing audio fanart using the song 25 Miles 2001 by Three Amigos. I think this song would work even better for Max racing the train home after the movie though.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1344186/
This fella here did a fuckin' amazing audio fanart using the song 25 Miles 2001 by Three Amigos. I think this song would work even better for Max racing the train home after the movie though.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1344186/
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