I have to say, I have a lot of sympathy for Husker. This accurately recreates what it's like to break an intense diet on a whim, and just how GOOD, it feels to endlessly indulge. It's a classic story and theme, but done so well.

However, for a first post to this site, this is amazing. Easily better than the crap I posted when I started. I can't wait to see what else you can do

You are too sweet, thank you so much aaaa! ;~; <3

Now that was a really fun read! You did a great job just showing off how this primal hunger absolutely ripped through this guy no matter how hard he tried to fight it. The way his stomach was actually ordering him towards the end, overriding all self control as he could do nothing but feast and swell up was a fantastic depiction of someone being so lost to their appetites. Very top shelf stuff

Also as a side note, I'm glad someone else got vibes from that one scene from Incredibles. On its own it's not exactly my thing but the energy of it, being rapidly weighed down and movement hindered by rapidly expanding soft mass until you're incapacitated. That's definitely a Mood and one you did a good job capturing

Thank you so much for sharing!

Eeee thank you for this!! I really wanted to convey the feeling of a freight train picking up speed, or a snowball rolling down a mountain, gathering momentum and mass and unable to be stopped <3

Also same on the Incredibles - the original scene did nothing for me but as a comparison for embiggening I thought it was tasty~