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Glory is the first big collaboration between
foxenawolf and myself. She does the linework, and I make it a comic. Basically I draw the panels and do the toning and shading and tweak and move and wiggle people around and just comic it up.
WE KNOW THE GUN BARREL IS HUGE THANK YOU SO MUCH. Consider it Sam vision. Guns seem a lot bigger when pointed at you. Regardless, Silver is extremely protective of his fluffy little catwife and two strangers, including an undead, stomping into his forest with his missing nephew has him a little on edge. Sam's probably on edge too, but for entirely different reasons... like the shotgun pointed in his dace.
Glory is the first big collaboration between
foxenawolf and myself. She does the linework, and I make it a comic. Basically I draw the panels and do the toning and shading and tweak and move and wiggle people around and just comic it up.WE KNOW THE GUN BARREL IS HUGE THANK YOU SO MUCH. Consider it Sam vision. Guns seem a lot bigger when pointed at you. Regardless, Silver is extremely protective of his fluffy little catwife and two strangers, including an undead, stomping into his forest with his missing nephew has him a little on edge. Sam's probably on edge too, but for entirely different reasons... like the shotgun pointed in his dace.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
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What Sam should be saying...
Sam: Madam Clarity, please kindly call off your husband. I am Samuel Voght, and the dwarf currently asleep on the ground is Verse. We were escorting your nephew to you. I, honestly, wanted to just toss him out of the carriage as we went by, but Verse convinced me that wouldn't be polite.
Sam: Madam Clarity, please kindly call off your husband. I am Samuel Voght, and the dwarf currently asleep on the ground is Verse. We were escorting your nephew to you. I, honestly, wanted to just toss him out of the carriage as we went by, but Verse convinced me that wouldn't be polite.
It's not silly and I welcome any genuine question. I experimented with pacing in this scene as this is my first shot at a big dramatic project. This time it unfortunately fell flat and confused some folks, that's why I added page 86 here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/58938275/ to help somewhat. I didn't want to drag the story on with countless pages of travel but in hindsight the story would have been better served with a travel scene.
Basically what happened is Sam and Verse took Rusty north to where the Blood Forests are and dismounted to walk the rest of the way as there's a sort of cool teleport shortcut gate they can take from Silver's house (the carriage was magic and is running to town), Verse led them to 'Clarity's Path' and then passed out a bit of the way in, Sam got hit with a bolo that Fox forgot to draw so we decided it's on his feet so you won't see it until the end of the scene, Silver and Clarity pop out with weapons and assume that these two people marching in with Rusty are here to play blackmail games and plan to deal with them as such, and Rusty grabs Silver's shotgun because darnathi empaths HATE undead in particular and Rusty knows Sam doesn't have much time.
My original goal was to try and make the reader feel as jolted and confused as Sam does as the whole scene is mostly from his mental perspective and awareness. But there's no indicators that's where I want the reader to be for them to pick up on, and Fox and I are still learning each other's style and pacing when it comes to making pages. I learned something from this at least! But it was a failed attempt, none the less.
Basically what happened is Sam and Verse took Rusty north to where the Blood Forests are and dismounted to walk the rest of the way as there's a sort of cool teleport shortcut gate they can take from Silver's house (the carriage was magic and is running to town), Verse led them to 'Clarity's Path' and then passed out a bit of the way in, Sam got hit with a bolo that Fox forgot to draw so we decided it's on his feet so you won't see it until the end of the scene, Silver and Clarity pop out with weapons and assume that these two people marching in with Rusty are here to play blackmail games and plan to deal with them as such, and Rusty grabs Silver's shotgun because darnathi empaths HATE undead in particular and Rusty knows Sam doesn't have much time.
My original goal was to try and make the reader feel as jolted and confused as Sam does as the whole scene is mostly from his mental perspective and awareness. But there's no indicators that's where I want the reader to be for them to pick up on, and Fox and I are still learning each other's style and pacing when it comes to making pages. I learned something from this at least! But it was a failed attempt, none the less.
Thanks.
I did read that. I was thinking that happened in the past.
Background story of things that went on.
I also just noticed you left details on the page of the comic's.
I never read them. I would only read the comic's and stop.
Which never left me wondering till after they got to his house and was about to leave. And they found out he knew the one's in the forest. AFter that things to me did not add up with the others in the story.
I need to go back and reread them again.
I did read that. I was thinking that happened in the past.
Background story of things that went on.
I also just noticed you left details on the page of the comic's.
I never read them. I would only read the comic's and stop.
Which never left me wondering till after they got to his house and was about to leave. And they found out he knew the one's in the forest. AFter that things to me did not add up with the others in the story.
I need to go back and reread them again.
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