I like this story. It's very cute and has a surprise ending!

Yay, thanks! I've always loved this one. ^.^

What a very cute and lovable story, Zoom. I really liked how the whole mystery panned out and, honestly , could visualize it as being something you could make for an interesting episode of a cartoon series that is geared toward a younger audience.

Overall, if I had to pick a favorite part, I'd have to go with the ending. I really didn't see it coming and, honestly, believe it is the most honest and fun answer you could have for character's their age. Kids have a way of conveniently "forgetting" things.

Thanks, Yoshy! Heehee, I love the ending too - as far as I know, nobody who's read the story has ever guessed who the real cookie thief was. ^.^

Thanks so much for the compliments, I really really appreciate all the kind words!

No problem, Zoom. They're all well earned as you are a fine writer. It was a pleasure to go through this along with all of the other works you recommended I browse. :)

Forgot to comment on this earlier, but I shall do so now!

As Yosh-E-O said, a very cute story indeed! You ought to turn this into a children's story, I bet it would be a good one! I know I would buy it if it ever got published over here!

This one's super cute ^_^

*blushy giggles* Thank you! ^.^

If you haven't found it, there's one other story like this in my gallery: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2270755/

huh.. why didnt i see this earlier.. well written and very nice zee. *pats your head*