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A short story for Christmas! Two reindeer go from fit gym bros fighting for first place, to the fattest, gayest, laziest reindeer anyone has ever seen. Kind of a cute one, a little teasing but pretty PG all things considered. Inspired by @dragontzin's really cute picture of those two infamously gay reindeer, all plumped up.
You can read it online here, too: https://hyenaddict.net/story.php?w=Reindeer_Gains
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You can read it online here, too: https://hyenaddict.net/story.php?w=Reindeer_Gains
6,818 words
Category Story / All
Species Reindeer
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 87.5 kB
Listed in Folders
What a DELIGHTFUL story!!
I love how vividly you tell a story of two rivals becoming friends becoming love interests in both the physical sense, but also the emotional realm. You have become so good at the art of "show, don't tell" because the very plot and the elements within the story lead the reader to buy into the narrative without needing any extra details. I love how it is implied that the other reindeer have different personalities, but we don't need a complex backstory for each of them.
And of course, having a mutual gain relationship where one of them takes up baking and the other becomes the snack specialist is just music to my ears. I'm glad you were inspired by my drawing. I thoroughly agree. There aren't a lot of things better than a gay wide cervine... but having two of them is cartainly a way to sweeten the deal!!
I love how vividly you tell a story of two rivals becoming friends becoming love interests in both the physical sense, but also the emotional realm. You have become so good at the art of "show, don't tell" because the very plot and the elements within the story lead the reader to buy into the narrative without needing any extra details. I love how it is implied that the other reindeer have different personalities, but we don't need a complex backstory for each of them.
And of course, having a mutual gain relationship where one of them takes up baking and the other becomes the snack specialist is just music to my ears. I'm glad you were inspired by my drawing. I thoroughly agree. There aren't a lot of things better than a gay wide cervine... but having two of them is cartainly a way to sweeten the deal!!
That’s so kind!! Really, I should thank you, you’re always such creating such vivid, amazing work - you’ve really been an inspiration many times. These two deer were low key favorites of mine from the first time I saw that clip, but when I saw how adorable they were when you draw them tubby, I couldn’t resist myself. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story!
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