3- Fade Away
by Gothic
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Song number 3 in my Demo CD. You guys may recognize this one from me uploading it before.
Album Cover linework done by the amazing
:Update: Revamped as of January 6ths, 2012
Lyrics
Conflicting ties
Bind me to a time
where the air was out of reach
I can barely breathe
Out of rhyme
Out of thought
out of mind
Can't help but doubt my ears
Is this my destiny?
The white wolf on my arm
Is there another way,
Claims I'm too strong to harm
To keep this curse at bay?
I'll break through, come what may
I give myself today~
I turned to her to say
If I fade away into nothing
Would it stir remorse inside of you
If I gave you all my sorrows
Would you see the void I'm falling through
Falling deeper through eternity
Sitting in the shadows, help me see
If I save everyone…
Who's saving me?
Falling behind
in a time where no one
Seems to want a healer's touch.
I don't ask for much.
I can't find any truth in my gift
Pain so to be my only rush
I think I've had enough
A black cat crossed my path
No turning back
She claims my life's on track
I've got the knack
The curse is here to stay
I don't get a break
Until I fade away
If I fade away into nothing
Would it stir remorse inside of you
If I gave you all my sorrows
Would you see the void I'm falling through
Falling deeper through eternity
Sitting in the shadows, help me see
If I save everyone…
Who's saving me?
I reach out my hand
From the shadows on my life
Begging someone help me
End my strife
My heart keeps growing harder
The world labels me a martyr!
I've found I'm not that brave.
Am I worth the time to save?!
If I fade away into nothing
Would it stir remorse inside of you
If I gave you all my sorrows
Would you see the void I'm falling through
Falling deeper through eternity
Sitting in the shadows, help me see
If I save everyone…
Who's saving me?
If I fade away into nothing
Would it stir remorse inside of you
If I gave you all my sorrows
Would you see the void I'm falling through
Falling deeper through eternity
Sitting in the shadows, help me see
If I save everyone…
Who's saving me?
Album Cover linework done by the amazing

:Update: Revamped as of January 6ths, 2012
Lyrics
Conflicting ties
Bind me to a time
where the air was out of reach
I can barely breathe
Out of rhyme
Out of thought
out of mind
Can't help but doubt my ears
Is this my destiny?
The white wolf on my arm
Is there another way,
Claims I'm too strong to harm
To keep this curse at bay?
I'll break through, come what may
I give myself today~
I turned to her to say
If I fade away into nothing
Would it stir remorse inside of you
If I gave you all my sorrows
Would you see the void I'm falling through
Falling deeper through eternity
Sitting in the shadows, help me see
If I save everyone…
Who's saving me?
Falling behind
in a time where no one
Seems to want a healer's touch.
I don't ask for much.
I can't find any truth in my gift
Pain so to be my only rush
I think I've had enough
A black cat crossed my path
No turning back
She claims my life's on track
I've got the knack
The curse is here to stay
I don't get a break
Until I fade away
If I fade away into nothing
Would it stir remorse inside of you
If I gave you all my sorrows
Would you see the void I'm falling through
Falling deeper through eternity
Sitting in the shadows, help me see
If I save everyone…
Who's saving me?
I reach out my hand
From the shadows on my life
Begging someone help me
End my strife
My heart keeps growing harder
The world labels me a martyr!
I've found I'm not that brave.
Am I worth the time to save?!
If I fade away into nothing
Would it stir remorse inside of you
If I gave you all my sorrows
Would you see the void I'm falling through
Falling deeper through eternity
Sitting in the shadows, help me see
If I save everyone…
Who's saving me?
If I fade away into nothing
Would it stir remorse inside of you
If I gave you all my sorrows
Would you see the void I'm falling through
Falling deeper through eternity
Sitting in the shadows, help me see
If I save everyone…
Who's saving me?
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Thank you though. <3
I guess I'm hearing things.
Either really good midi, or nice guitar.
some of the notes in the vocal line aren't in the key.
On "fade away into nothing" the higher note in the word away is implying a major tonality while the backing track is minor. You should consider lowering it a half step especially since the passage is repeated a good 8 times or so.
There's a coupld otherr parts lke that. At first I thought you were just a little sharp, but I think it was on purpose.